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A not so wordy poem
Words can never cover
all the things i want to state
but may make some faint impression
with the facts i now relate
all the things i want to state
but may make some faint impression
with the facts i now relate
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Re. A not so wordy poem
24th Jan 2025 7:56pm
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Re. A not so wordy poem
24th Jan 2025 8:15pm
Don't chase ideas.Just let them come and write them down.
You have more than enough talent.
You have more than enough talent.
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Re. A not so wordy poem
25th Jan 2025 3:00am
Powerful write, Keith. You gotta live and write in the moment, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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25th Jan 2025 10:06am
Absolutely. Drying up here as of late. The ideas aren't coming to me as they were. Thanks my friend.
Re. A not so wordy poem
25th Jan 2025 9:30am
Sometimes less (wordy) is more. You really said a lot in those 4 lines. This is a lovely little piece.
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Re. A not so wordy poem
27th Jan 2025 3:36pm
Pages breathe your thoughts
Lost within your woven worlds
Love blooms between lines
Lost within your woven worlds
Love blooms between lines
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