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Pretend
Frozen stare fixed on a computer screen
Watching the waves move with the sound
Voice of reason always ready to intervene
How long till the next song comes around
When did you start second guessing me?
Turning mole hills into full blown calamity
Funneling booze into a hemorrhaging mind
Leads to blame pointed in the wrong place
Haunted by ghosts while logic turned blind
Demons work while wearing a familiar face
When was it you sold your light my friend?
Deciding to surrender just to play pretend
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Watching the waves move with the sound
Voice of reason always ready to intervene
How long till the next song comes around
When did you start second guessing me?
Turning mole hills into full blown calamity
Funneling booze into a hemorrhaging mind
Leads to blame pointed in the wrong place
Haunted by ghosts while logic turned blind
Demons work while wearing a familiar face
When was it you sold your light my friend?
Deciding to surrender just to play pretend
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Author's Note
Late night musing. Just spinning words, letting fate guide me. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" In the shadow moon
Steel tears I cried
You were out of tune
It seemed to suit my dark side."
- Lindsey Buckingham
- Damian DeadLove
" In the shadow moon
Steel tears I cried
You were out of tune
It seemed to suit my dark side."
- Lindsey Buckingham
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Re: Re. Pretend
25th Jan 2025 3:22am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Pretend
24th Jan 2025 9:18am
Hello Damian,
Your pieces often have a way to reflect on facets of truths. I feel that through your late night musings you offer shards of these. Somehow there were hints of sadness in this. I can only say I felt recognition reading your words, greetings and blessings,
Rianne
Your pieces often have a way to reflect on facets of truths. I feel that through your late night musings you offer shards of these. Somehow there were hints of sadness in this. I can only say I felt recognition reading your words, greetings and blessings,
Rianne
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Re: Re. Pretend
25th Jan 2025 3:27am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Rianne. I'm glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your continued support, enjoyed your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Pretend
24th Jan 2025 10:20am
Hello Damian. Great piece of writing here. Nicely said and well executed.
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Re: Re. Pretend
25th Jan 2025 3:28am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Pretend
24th Jan 2025 12:10pm
"Leads to blame pointed in the wrong place" > so many people do that, unfortunately. While unknowingly the accusations they make are usually towards their own flaws.
Love the personal tone of this, that it's directed at a friend. Great piece, my friend. I appreciate you.
Love the personal tone of this, that it's directed at a friend. Great piece, my friend. I appreciate you.
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Re: Re. Pretend
25th Jan 2025 3:34am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. Honored to make your RL. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. I couldn't agree more, a lot of people these days love to project their flaws on to another. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Pretend
Oh my gosh, Damian. "Funneling booze into a hemorrhaging mind" what vivid imagery. Love it
To me, this sounds like you were staring off into the computer, thinking of what to say. The fact you put the waves in it reminds me of the Twilight Zone beginning credits (Alcohol affects everyone differently. Not glazing over that)
To me, this sounds like you were staring off into the computer, thinking of what to say. The fact you put the waves in it reminds me of the Twilight Zone beginning credits (Alcohol affects everyone differently. Not glazing over that)
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Re: Re. Pretend
25th Jan 2025 3:43am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. Honored to make your RL. I loved that line as well. The computer screen was in a former friend's studio, the waves are the digital equalizer. It was like a Twilight Zone episode, every time we worked on music together. Add alcohol into the mix, the wheels would always fall off at some point. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Pretend
Anonymous
24th Jan 2025 6:31pm
There will always be those who blame others, ignoring their own faults through haze of alcohol.
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Re: Re. Pretend
25th Jan 2025 3:54am
Thanks so much for reading and your commentary, Metropolis. Totally agree. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Pretend
24th Jan 2025 8:45pm
the hypocrisies of a mind that had sold it’s soul .. for the worldliness of lies lies lies .. drenching forever in dirts & drowsiness & darkness .. such strong rendition in n-concentrative pithy verses .. a voice of the narrative so power & polite n all realising .. yet versing philosophical in hope.. am ecstatic I find this tone in all your reads Damian.. consistent & pure xxxx
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Re: Re. Pretend
25th Jan 2025 3:58am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Uma. Honored to make your RL. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Pretend
24th Jan 2025 10:11pm
Great question. Alcohol is indeed, a demon. Literally. It is said that the word Alcohol comes from the Arabic “Al-Kuhl” which means “Body Eating Spirit”. It is the worst drug in the world and the one that is legally consumed.
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Re: Re. Pretend
25th Jan 2025 4:06am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. Honored to make your RL. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Never heard that before, but it is accurate. Plus, I learned something new, I love learning new information. It is the worst, I abused it off and on again for over 30 years. My memory used to be so much sharper. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Pretend
25th Jan 2025 2:45pm
"When was it you sold your light my friend?"
Given in the times we're living in and where we're heading, I could ask that of many folks. With no light, some folks can't see where they're going.
Thought provoking write Damian.
Given in the times we're living in and where we're heading, I could ask that of many folks. With no light, some folks can't see where they're going.
Thought provoking write Damian.
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Re: Re. Pretend
26th Jan 2025 3:47am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. I loved that line as well. It's dark times, we definitely need to hold on to the light. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Pretend
26th Jan 2025 3:08pm
I sometimes think the mind is our worst enemy. Especially when denial comes into play. The tendency to cast blame anywhere but ourselves is so self-destructive. It allows one to ignore the wounds...which then get infected. That kind of damage can be very dangerous. Those last 2 lines are like a punch to the gut
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Re: Re. Pretend
27th Jan 2025 3:29am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. It is our worst enemy sometimes that's for sure. I loved those lines as well. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian