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If you would like the music I was listening too while writing this, plz search >Lost love: Mattia Cupelli and listen while reading. Ty❤️
I am already dead inside
my excuses & denial
killed me
happy
was only a concept
any sense of joy
was always short lived
it never lasted
ever…
I feed the hungry,
the kind who ravish
your heart & soul
leaving none to spare
or waste
It will never end
I am uncomfortably
numb…
I am already dead inside
my excuses & denial
killed me
happy
was only a concept
any sense of joy
was always short lived
it never lasted
ever…
I feed the hungry,
the kind who ravish
your heart & soul
leaving none to spare
or waste
It will never end
I am uncomfortably
numb…
Published 22nd Jan 2025
| Edited 23rd Jan 2025
Author's Note
Note:
The music is about lost love, however my poem has nothing to do with that. It was the music that pulled me in and had me write this.
Copyright © 2025 J. Doucette
All rights Reserved.
The music is about lost love, however my poem has nothing to do with that. It was the music that pulled me in and had me write this.
Copyright © 2025 J. Doucette
All rights Reserved.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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23rd Jan 2025 7:03am
26th Jan 2025 5:55pm
Yes it’s a bummer for sure MS. Hope your mind clears up love. Thanks for looking and leaving your thoughts.
Jackie xoxo
Jackie xoxo
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23rd Jan 2025 8:54am
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Hello Sis❤️ it’s funny how music makes you write.
Nice seeing you ❤️Thanks for the list love
Love Always
Jackie xox
Nice seeing you ❤️Thanks for the list love
Love Always
Jackie xox
23rd Jan 2025 12:10pm
Oh fuck, your words made me tear up. It's never ending cycle, isn't it. Giving your heart and having it ravished. The song is heartbreakingly beautiful - goosebumps. Hugs you tightly in thoughts, dearest Jackie 💕
26th Jan 2025 5:59pm
Hi Duende,
Yes I was just reflecting, i always get the broken men. It’s like I have a sign on back that says
“All broken souls welcome.”
Thanks for the reading list and thanks for leaving your thoughts and tears
Love Jackie ❤️🫶🏻
Yes I was just reflecting, i always get the broken men. It’s like I have a sign on back that says
“All broken souls welcome.”
Thanks for the reading list and thanks for leaving your thoughts and tears
Love Jackie ❤️🫶🏻
23rd Jan 2025 5:38pm
26th Jan 2025 6:00pm
25th Jan 2025 8:05am
Dear J,
“happy
was only a concept
any sense of joy
was always short lived
it never lasted
ever… ” brilliant! And ever so relatable. I really admired how the third stanza tied into the title. The sense of void for me in this piece was so wonderfully expressed. Fab writing. H🌷
“happy
was only a concept
any sense of joy
was always short lived
it never lasted
ever… ” brilliant! And ever so relatable. I really admired how the third stanza tied into the title. The sense of void for me in this piece was so wonderfully expressed. Fab writing. H🌷
26th Jan 2025 6:03pm
I always get the damaged men. Then again, I wonder sometimes, am i the damaged one and change people?
Thanks for the visit Honoria ❤️
Love
Jackie xo
Thanks for the visit Honoria ❤️
Love
Jackie xo
6th Feb 2025 4:10pm
Sis, I think you need some Hot soup with some oyster crackers. That will warm up your insides.
News has you in winter weather. Hope you are well and warm.
News has you in winter weather. Hope you are well and warm.
6th Feb 2025 9:13pm
I am alright Leo, and yes, we’re getting hit back to back with snow. Hope you’re well, my brother love you.❤️
Jackie xo
Jackie xo
27th Feb 2025 1:59am
Love this. Especially that last line, "I am uncomfortably numb." The perfect way to the express the sadness at the heart of our culture right now. So much going on and time for us to make a stand as you have here and so bravely.
Much love, your brother,
John
Much love, your brother,
John
