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God, What a Moment
It was... God, what a moment!
It was a moment encased in an eternity of moments.
And so, in fact, my first orgasm was insignificant
To the arc of history. But for me, it was the most meaningful
Moment of my life and the arrival of life’s abundance
And potential for joy.
In truth, every thought, every action,
And yes, every addiction after that moment
Has been an attempt to capture ecstasy and make it last.
It was a moment encased in an eternity of moments.
And so, in fact, my first orgasm was insignificant
To the arc of history. But for me, it was the most meaningful
Moment of my life and the arrival of life’s abundance
And potential for joy.
In truth, every thought, every action,
And yes, every addiction after that moment
Has been an attempt to capture ecstasy and make it last.
Published 22nd Jan 2025
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2025 5:27pm
You could be speaking for me. Like an addiction we go back to find that first discovery that directed the rest of our lives.
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23rd Jan 2025 4:58am
Some people fall into addictive gambling because they had an exhilarating big win early on and want to recreate the experience, but only succeed in making their finances suffer. In that sense, other addictions could be considered forms of gambling, and their health suffers. (One may see the point of my illustration if you substitute the word "win" for "orgasm" in your poem.)
25th Jan 2025 3:07pm
