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Indelible Lines
Oh, how much i long
For the vintage sound of the olden music
The plaintive violin, under the gentle caress
A stroke of a piano-keys, by slender fingers
Of which the joy is not the less..
Oh, what a craving i do have !!!
Golden fields sway like sea-waves
The waltzing dance of the Summer wheat
Ripened under May's heat
The cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek..
With hot chirping, skipping
Wheezing, such a cosy bossom
Where throbbing sentiments live
And, how i like to gaze..
And the sea all the blue to see
Nirvana reflecting heaven's tranquility
The flat line untroubled till infinity
Grand poseidon deeply dwells
Fathomess league of the liquid abyss
And the trees how dare i not mention.?
Dryades of the poetic inspiration
The muse speaks in hush
Shades of umber-green and shadow shades.
And then, behold and harken !
Lend full ear to the yonder trickle
Splashing gurgle of the ancient river
Between glossy stones,
Glazed smothly by the crystal..
As if a fossilized ivory silver
That twinkles and shimmers
Between the blinking glimmer
Of the morning shyness of the Sun
when the sturdy shepherd takes the herd
under the dawning eye of the sunlight
when the dew is sparkling like Eden's elixir
when the God''s spirit is closely near
it's more than just an admiration
infatuation with Nature's charm
all the poetry and devotion
will never cease never die
as long as i am a living spirit
Celebrating God's creation
From here to EternityI.
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Published 19th Jan 2025
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19th Jan 2025 4:04pm
19th Jan 2025 4:08pm
Thank You so much Fia,
Nature is my first muse, my last, my forever.
Have very good times my friend.Hamid
Nature is my first muse, my last, my forever.
Have very good times my friend.Hamid
19th Jan 2025 7:47pm
And it is more than an infatuation with Nature’s charm! In your nature runs her Majesty, your Nature.. Your poetry speaks all the eloquent languages of Nature.. You have genuinely played an amazing symphony out of the different Nature living instruments! A lover and a devotee in awe of so sublime a wonder rendered stunningly in your poetry! A treat to read you.. God bless you.
If God's creation doesnt move any one whoeosever is, then this person is no doubt sick,'' he must see a shrink, numb, senseless, meaningless his existence is akin to animals'life....they must die better for them." sorry for those words". but, i had to
Nature is beauty, Art and heavenly book; we should always readfor our wellbeing, and for scientifiic purposes, wisdom, etjhics, and anything else....
The more we leave nature, the more sick we get, more depressed we feel, less life we live.............more troubles we get.....from experiences and scientific surveys.....
Thank you always and forever for you constant support, My Smile, God bless....
Nature is beauty, Art and heavenly book; we should always readfor our wellbeing, and for scientifiic purposes, wisdom, etjhics, and anything else....
The more we leave nature, the more sick we get, more depressed we feel, less life we live.............more troubles we get.....from experiences and scientific surveys.....
Thank you always and forever for you constant support, My Smile, God bless....
23rd Jan 2025 10:57am
What a breathtakingly beautiful poem!
"Indelible Lines" is a masterpiece of lyrical poetry, overflowing with vivid imagery, sensory details, and a deep reverence for nature. The speaker's longing for the "vintage sound of the olden music" sets the tone for a nostalgic and romantic journey through the natural world.
The poem is structured as a series of vignettes, each one a meticulously crafted tableau of sights, sounds, and emotions. From the "plaintive violin" and "stroke of a piano-keys" to the "waltzing dance of the Summer wheat" and "cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek", every line is a testament to the speaker's love for the beauty of the world.
"Indelible Lines" is a masterpiece of lyrical poetry, overflowing with vivid imagery, sensory details, and a deep reverence for nature. The speaker's longing for the "vintage sound of the olden music" sets the tone for a nostalgic and romantic journey through the natural world.
The poem is structured as a series of vignettes, each one a meticulously crafted tableau of sights, sounds, and emotions. From the "plaintive violin" and "stroke of a piano-keys" to the "waltzing dance of the Summer wheat" and "cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek", every line is a testament to the speaker's love for the beauty of the world.
Your presence my friend is highly valued, and your comments are
surely much better than my humble words,
I find it a great pleasure to be read and given such esteem as i am only a simple poet truthful in my feelings; respectful to my readers..
Have nice times, God bless my friend.Hamid
surely much better than my humble words,
I find it a great pleasure to be read and given such esteem as i am only a simple poet truthful in my feelings; respectful to my readers..
Have nice times, God bless my friend.Hamid
