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You Made Me Your World
In making me your world
You have destroyed me
Engulfing me in tenderness
Sweet serenity
I did not realize the cracks
The silent tremors
The microscopic lines
Grinding against each other
I am your whole world
I'm drowning, in its depth
So deep there is no bottom
There is just being
When a kiss can cause
Volcanoes to erupt
and the ground shake
There is no world that
Can survive on these tectonic plates
You have destroyed me
Engulfing me in tenderness
Sweet serenity
I did not realize the cracks
The silent tremors
The microscopic lines
Grinding against each other
I am your whole world
I'm drowning, in its depth
So deep there is no bottom
There is just being
When a kiss can cause
Volcanoes to erupt
and the ground shake
There is no world that
Can survive on these tectonic plates
Published Yesterday
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Yesterday 11:46pm
Different, beautiful in the way that so many do this but and then they needed it. This is how they function in a relationship as the main focus or shining the spot light on a loved one
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Words so true to life it's a shame that it happens to those who have a good heart 💖 that it makes one wonder why even bother 🤔 but we all deserve better not worse for where is the commitment and consistency and real communications skills to articulate what you want and need not what you don't need or want 👍.
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
Today 2:38am
Brilliantly penned, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Had a different vibe, but in a wonderful way. Liked this a lot, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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After 5 or 6 more reads this is poem of the month material. Hope you don't mind me nominating you, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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I like the poetic contradictions in this, the tension between being made someone’s world and how oppressive that may feel.
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Wow! This is absolutely brilliant, Fia! Dependency is always a bad premise for a relationship!
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