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A Romantic..
want and romance
and then
the opening
the walkway looking west
a small cutaway
I held you close
staring into your laser eyes
holding you tight
tenderness spinning out of control
a new control emerged
one you knew was buried
deep in my brow
matching you stare for stare
electrons and gamma rays
cross stimulation
I took your smile
and marked it
with my mine
taking you
under my wing
protecting you
feeding you
giving you breath
tasting your passion
leaving us hungry for more…
and then
the opening
the walkway looking west
a small cutaway
I held you close
staring into your laser eyes
holding you tight
tenderness spinning out of control
a new control emerged
one you knew was buried
deep in my brow
matching you stare for stare
electrons and gamma rays
cross stimulation
I took your smile
and marked it
with my mine
taking you
under my wing
protecting you
feeding you
giving you breath
tasting your passion
leaving us hungry for more…
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. A Romantic..
15th Jan 2025 1:56pm
Beautiful painting ...soft n mushy just like the passion expressed in the lovely poem 👍
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Re: Re. A Romantic..
15th Jan 2025 2:05pm
Thank you so much ID
Picking the painting to match the poem is always a fun challenge...
I'm glad you like it
Thanks !!
Picking the painting to match the poem is always a fun challenge...
I'm glad you like it
Thanks !!
Re. A Romantic..
15th Jan 2025 2:02pm
This is a lovely write. The picture with it's soft tones and swatches of intense sunrise orange is perfect pairing
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Re: Re. A Romantic..
15th Jan 2025 2:06pm
Re. A Romantic..
15th Jan 2025 9:44pm
Damn, Poet!! Maybe January suits you, even if the cold mornings suck. This is friggin' beautiful.
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. A Romantic..
Thanks RED
Now I'm gonna get a swollen head thinking how good a poet I am ....
💕
Now I'm gonna get a swollen head thinking how good a poet I am ....
💕
Re. A Romantic..
15th Jan 2025 9:45pm
Beautifully written, Speak. Nice painting as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. A Romantic..
15th Jan 2025 11:14pm
Thanks D
I don't write this romantic too often so I think our readers might be shocked...
So it goes
Thx D
I don't write this romantic too often so I think our readers might be shocked...
So it goes
Thx D
Re. A Romantic..
15th Jan 2025 11:48pm
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16th Jan 2025 4:48pm
Re. A Romantic..
18th Jan 2025 1:23am
Re. A Romantic..
18th Jan 2025 3:06am
We were together, then apart..
Years passed, now reconciliation..
Ongoing in a silent way but intact ...
Appreciate your comment and RL
Thx
Years passed, now reconciliation..
Ongoing in a silent way but intact ...
Appreciate your comment and RL
Thx
Re. A Romantic..
Anonymous
18th Jan 2025 5:05am
Well now. Pretty pairing from your sensitive side.
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Re: Re. A Romantic..
18th Jan 2025 12:33pm
I am a romantic at heart but other factors make me Dominant. Pick your poison or passion darling Pink ...
Thx babe
Thx babe
Re. A Romantic..
18th Jan 2025 4:46pm
Bloody hell...I don't know which is more beautiful...poem or painting. Together they're breathtaking!
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Re: Re. A Romantic..
18th Jan 2025 4:55pm
Re. A Romantic..
19th Jan 2025 8:06am
Oh wow, laser eyes, electrons and gamma rays 😍
Love the wording of this piece, the soft & romantic vibe.
Gorgeous painting too, it pairs beautifully with your poem.
Love the wording of this piece, the soft & romantic vibe.
Gorgeous painting too, it pairs beautifully with your poem.
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Re: Re. A Romantic..
19th Jan 2025 12:22pm
Thank you so much D for your generous praise....
I love when you comment on my writing and paintings.
BIG THRILL
Thanks
I love when you comment on my writing and paintings.
BIG THRILL
Thanks