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Wintry tears drip deep
into icy, dark waters
The stream is endless,
as she came to me in the form of paradise
As I envisioned
I made a decision
Wisdom floats
as infinity awaits
into icy, dark waters
The stream is endless,
as she came to me in the form of paradise
As I envisioned
I made a decision
Wisdom floats
as infinity awaits
Published 8th Jan 2025
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8th Jan 2025 11:52pm
9th Jan 2025 11:58am
9th Jan 2025 3:38am
Brilliantly written, Keith. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
9th Jan 2025 11:58am
12th Jan 2025 4:16pm
Profound & poetic.. embracing the eternal truth in all the gained wise clarity .. your pen is minimal yet astounding in depths here Keith! xx
12th Jan 2025 6:45pm
