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ours was less a
relationship
and more the battle
of Hastings
and unlike the
Kentucky derby
there was no
runner up
there was only live
to fight another day
...and another
day
...and another
day
...and another
day
I wanted to love
you so badly
...and I did
Published 8th Jan 2025
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8th Jan 2025 11:47am
8th Jan 2025 12:44pm
1.I want to love you so badly: desperately.
2.I want to love you so badly: to do something half-assed or incompetently:
and I did.
There. Hope the jokes is clarified.
regards
buddhakitty
2.I want to love you so badly: to do something half-assed or incompetently:
and I did.
There. Hope the jokes is clarified.
regards
buddhakitty
8th Jan 2025 2:19pm
8th Jan 2025 12:49pm
Unfortunately, we can't love those who aren't willing to be loved, Kitts. Especially if we don't know how. . .
8th Jan 2025 1:25pm
Agreed. This comes from an experience in my much younger and foolish days. It made for a good joke ending.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
25th Jan 2025 1:52pm
Oh to love so strong and willingly, and especially in days of youth, we felt so invincible. But with time we go to a higher plane of understanding, like going into outer space and seeing everything from a wider point of view.
Found this relatable too.
Found this relatable too.
25th Jan 2025 6:07pm
I think most of us have been there a time or two.
Much appreciated, wally.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Much appreciated, wally.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
25th Jan 2025 6:07pm
I think most of us have been there a time or two.
Much appreciated, wally.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Much appreciated, wally.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
