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Draws Down, Face Up
A homeless man in New York found a manhole in the Bronx that was just out of the way enough to offer him some privacy, so he routinely used it as a toilet. One day he lost his balance and was found dead at the bottom of the sewer. Draws down, face up.
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30th Dec 2024 12:57pm
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30th Dec 2024 12:57pm
Re. Draws Down, Face Up
30th Dec 2024 3:43pm
This lends itself to multiple applications. Excellent. Hugs and love, Oral
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30th Dec 2024 3:47pm
Re. Draws Down, Face Up
30th Dec 2024 4:16pm
The title reads .. as if he is finally having his say .. his space .. jus liberation.. all only in his death .. very poetic very symbolic Keith.. the sad state of affairs of such divide of poor n the rich .. in a money minded capitalist world .. us something deep concern .. that each one observes nearby .. but how many act .. at sone small levels to big impacting regime .. humanity & love seems such a lost ‘commodity’ in a trading world .. brutally killing anything . You, only you .. can spin such heavy societal narratives in such seeming light humoured manner .. but with underlying purpose xx
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30th Dec 2024 4:22pm
Re. Draws Down, Face Up
30th Dec 2024 9:51pm
Once when I was in band camp...
When I was at girl scout camp my friend fell into the outhouse toilet. It wasn't pretty. Thanks for the memory...
When I was at girl scout camp my friend fell into the outhouse toilet. It wasn't pretty. Thanks for the memory...
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Re: Re. Draws Down, Face Up
30th Dec 2024 11:37pm
WOW! That's a crazy story. She must have smelled delightful.
Great story. Thanks for sharing.
Great story. Thanks for sharing.
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31st Dec 2024 4:28am
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2025 9:23am
Hahaha i like this one. I can see it so vividly in my mind
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5th Jan 2025 12:32pm
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2025 3:23pm
Not yet!
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