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That's My Warning!
I like to be around you for about 24 to 48 hours and then I get sick of you
I don't like it when you tell me that you like me and want to spend more time with me
I keep my distance
On a certain level, you make me sick
Even your smell repels me
You see how I am on the third day
I don't want to know anything about your life
I like the girls the others don't touch
The ones that get called stupid
They're not as stupid as you might think
They know me
They know I'm a loner
They know why I come around
They know I'm only good for one thing
They're careful not to get to close
I like them because they don't care
They are the truth
I use them & they use me
We don't have to play any bullshit games
It's not about that
But back to you
You're nice
A bit too nice to be hanging around with me
Do the right thing
Get the Fuck away from me
That's my warning!
I don't like it when you tell me that you like me and want to spend more time with me
I keep my distance
On a certain level, you make me sick
Even your smell repels me
You see how I am on the third day
I don't want to know anything about your life
I like the girls the others don't touch
The ones that get called stupid
They're not as stupid as you might think
They know me
They know I'm a loner
They know why I come around
They know I'm only good for one thing
They're careful not to get to close
I like them because they don't care
They are the truth
I use them & they use me
We don't have to play any bullshit games
It's not about that
But back to you
You're nice
A bit too nice to be hanging around with me
Do the right thing
Get the Fuck away from me
That's my warning!
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Re. That's My Warning!
28th Dec 2024 10:55am
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28th Dec 2024 11:08am
Re. That's My Warning!
28th Dec 2024 12:15pm
There's beauty in absolute honesty. It's a rare commodity, though hopefully tempered with a bit of tact in real life.
I like the rawness of this piece.
I like the rawness of this piece.
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28th Dec 2024 2:41pm
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Re. That's My Warning!
28th Dec 2024 1:29pm
Must be the water on L.I.
I too was born with this sentiment
That's all I'll say
You know the rest brother Keith ..
I too was born with this sentiment
That's all I'll say
You know the rest brother Keith ..
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Re: Re. That's My Warning!
28th Dec 2024 2:43pm
HA! Maybe it is the water on LI. My patience run thin. Glad you can relate my friend. Thanks for the feedback!
Re. That's My Warning!
28th Dec 2024 2:54pm
The message is LOUD and CLEAR. Another unique poem from your creative soul. Hugs and love, Oral
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Re. That's My Warning!
28th Dec 2024 3:02pm
Warning shot fired. Very intense piece. Your open enough to let the person know. this.
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Re. That's My Warning!
28th Dec 2024 4:43pm
hello dearest Keith intense writing I'm not as stupid as I seem either I believe but I don't give anything up... I have friends though that most people would not befriend I enjoy the fringe ❤️
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28th Dec 2024 4:58pm
I hear ya. Keep them at arms length. Not too close. Thank you Brenda
Re. That's My Warning!
29th Dec 2024 5:37am
Straightforward write, Keith. Direct and honest. Dig it. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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