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Merry Christmas
"Merry Christmas!" He texted.
"Come and unwrap me." I replied.
He came.
Then, so did I.
;-)
"Come and unwrap me." I replied.
He came.
Then, so did I.
;-)
Published 27th Dec 2024
Author's Note
Just a cheeky quickie. I'm in that mood. Must be all the recent merriment.
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27th Dec 2024 2:15am
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27th Dec 2024 7:28am
The narrator easily presumably came (line 4) after the unwrapping of her had been done. A very short sharp sweet Christmas quickie!
27th Dec 2024 9:24pm
Poetry is open to interpretation, which is the beauty of this way of expressing yourself.
I was writing a story poem but then I read the paragraph that came after this and realised a "short, sharp, sweet Christmas quickie" as you so beautifully put, was the right thing to post.
I think I did the right thing.
I was writing a story poem but then I read the paragraph that came after this and realised a "short, sharp, sweet Christmas quickie" as you so beautifully put, was the right thing to post.
I think I did the right thing.
28th Dec 2024 3:23am
It's clever, I'll give you that. Too clever to be corny, in fact. Very good! I was expecting you to tell him to 'f-off!' if I'm totally honest.
I'm glad it had a happy ending. Very sweet. 🤗🤩
I'm glad it had a happy ending. Very sweet. 🤗🤩
28th Dec 2024 5:31am
Thank you, Billy and Fia. Of course there was going to be a happy ending.
I'm glad you both enjoyed it x
I'm glad you both enjoyed it x
29th Dec 2024 1:48am
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