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The Touch
The touch of a sinner
Summons the siren’s call
Melodic tunes whispered
From soft lips as
Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be
Letting nothing interrupt
This moment of passion
Immersing ourselves in
Orgasmic pleasure
Summons the siren’s call
Melodic tunes whispered
From soft lips as
Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be
Letting nothing interrupt
This moment of passion
Immersing ourselves in
Orgasmic pleasure
Published 20th Dec 2024
Author's Note
For the writing prompt "The Sinners Touch"
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20th Dec 2024 5:06pm
20th Dec 2024 6:28pm
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and appreciated the use of the word Siren. It's always rewarding to hear positive feedback. If you have any other thoughts or suggestions, feel free to share, since I'm a newbie:)
Favourite chunk, which goes with a flow, evoking the spirit of make-love-not-war:
Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be
Welcome to DUP (no it's not a rhyming additional line LOL), look forward to reading more.
Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be
Welcome to DUP (no it's not a rhyming additional line LOL), look forward to reading more.
20th Dec 2024 6:29pm
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed that part of the poem and felt the spirit of make-love-not-war. Your warm welcome means a lot to me, and I look forward to sharing more of my work with you and the DUP community. Stay tuned for more!
20th Dec 2024 8:56pm
"The touch of a sinner
Summons the siren’s call"
I really love that opening.
Summons the siren’s call"
I really love that opening.
21st Dec 2024 3:34am
21st Dec 2024 11:02pm
