The Touch

Yes this is a good introduction poem to DUP. Love the use of the Siren.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and appreciated the use of the word Siren. It's always rewarding to hear positive feedback. If you have any other thoughts or suggestions, feel free to share, since I'm a newbie:)

Favourite chunk, which goes with a flow, evoking the spirit of make-love-not-war:

Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be

Welcome to DUP (no it's not a rhyming additional line LOL), look forward to reading more.

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed that part of the poem and felt the spirit of make-love-not-war. Your warm welcome means a lot to me, and I look forward to sharing more of my work with you and the DUP community. Stay tuned for more!

"The touch of a sinner
Summons the siren’s call"

I really love that opening.

Steamy write. Welcome to DU. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hi Damian,

Thanks!

Simple intimacy...... a wonderful initiation to a very hard crowd here at the DUP.  Anxiously awaiting your sophomore attempts.  As we are all sinners, perhaps you and I might collaborate on something sinful together.  Great to have you here

Sample this one 4 me   https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/504288-fire-and-water/