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Remembering First
This spell of the world.
Compelling unfurl.
Intelligible.
Non-sensical curse.
What's selling assures.
Your melody mirth.
A skeleton dirge.
Where dwelling meets earth.
Ephemeral hearse.
Exemplary urn.
Heretical church.
Lest hellion rebirth.
Their swelling occurs.
Such leavening slurs.
To tell me disturbs.
Unhealthy disperse.
Our well is but dirt.
Extremity thirst.
Suggestible surge.
Indelible burn.
Dependency searched.
Unhelpfully hurt.
Perpetual spurn.
Trajectory turns.
Momentously merged.
No telling in word.
Surrendering worked.
Unselfishly worth.
Identity purged.
Incredible cure.
All Elohim learned.
Remembering first.
Compelling unfurl.
Intelligible.
Non-sensical curse.
What's selling assures.
Your melody mirth.
A skeleton dirge.
Where dwelling meets earth.
Ephemeral hearse.
Exemplary urn.
Heretical church.
Lest hellion rebirth.
Their swelling occurs.
Such leavening slurs.
To tell me disturbs.
Unhealthy disperse.
Our well is but dirt.
Extremity thirst.
Suggestible surge.
Indelible burn.
Dependency searched.
Unhelpfully hurt.
Perpetual spurn.
Trajectory turns.
Momentously merged.
No telling in word.
Surrendering worked.
Unselfishly worth.
Identity purged.
Incredible cure.
All Elohim learned.
Remembering first.
Published 14th Dec 2024
Author's Note
Just a brief gander behind the corruption of the world, and the insanity of religion and politics. The emotional exaggeration and lies are purported and perpetuated by said religion and politics. It leads to confusion in purpose, and death. The last 3 stanzas are about someone who is brought along by God to change, and the beauty in being in agreement with God.
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14th Dec 2024 5:43am
Brilliantly written, brother. Into the list it belongs. Great storytelling, loved the flow. Flawlessly executed. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
14th Dec 2024 6:18am
Wow, thank you so much. I feel somewhat inspired since you like it. You're a great writer yourself, and to hear feedback like that from you, is just an honor. Hah, anyway, your support is appreciated.
