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homeless
the night's
cold is
apparently
unaware
of what
it is
doing
to me,
it is
creeping
onto
my skin,
finding
its way
to
my bones,
and by
morning,
i may be
as cold
as the
night was,
unless the
sun can
save me.
cold is
apparently
unaware
of what
it is
doing
to me,
it is
creeping
onto
my skin,
finding
its way
to
my bones,
and by
morning,
i may be
as cold
as the
night was,
unless the
sun can
save me.
Author's Note
i have been homeless, i know a little more about the subject than i wanted to.
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Re. homeless
12th Dec 2024 3:54am
This is so sad to read about. I really can feel the cold but I guess that's only the half of it, right? There's the fear too. 😐
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Re: Re. homeless
12th Dec 2024 3:57am
Re. homeless
12th Dec 2024 3:57am
Re. homeless
12th Dec 2024 5:53am
I do some volunteering with the homeless and I'm staggered by their resilience.The nights can be cold for them but many have warm hearts and you are no different at least from what I can tell.
🙏
🙏
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Re: Re. homeless
12th Dec 2024 5:59am
Re. homeless
12th Dec 2024 6:47am
Dear J,
There is a stark reality between the coldness of a night and the coldness of having no home. You write that brilliantly in this piece. H🌷
There is a stark reality between the coldness of a night and the coldness of having no home. You write that brilliantly in this piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. homeless
12th Dec 2024 10:44am
Re. homeless
12th Dec 2024 10:39am
Re: Re. homeless
12th Dec 2024 10:45am
Re. homeless
13th Dec 2024 2:56am
Powerful write, Jimmy. So sorry you went through that, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. homeless
13th Dec 2024 4:31am
Re. homeless
13th Dec 2024 8:25pm
Our tribulations become our pillars.
But this poem still makes me want to hug you…
But this poem still makes me want to hug you…
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Re: Re. homeless
13th Dec 2024 8:53pm