Unable To Forget

Heavy piece. This one also had me thinking Damian. Great poem with some infectious rhymes. Nice work.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Honored to make your RL. I'm glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.

Damian

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Hope you're ok Damian

Thanks for reading and your kind words, Pete. I'm fine brother, just thinking out loud. Then this idea hit my head, and it was a really heavy vibe to write about. Appreciate you.

Damian  

This is beautiful and sad.  Nice memories

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. It was a pretty heavy write indeed. Appreciate you.

Damian

These are topics I rather won't think about, though it's unfortunately reality.

Love your last line, it gave me goosebumps. Great piece, my friend.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. Honored to make your RL. It was a heavy write to compose, my friend. I loved that line as well, although it's a haunting line. Appreciate you.

Damian  

A very delicate and touching piece of stone.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. Honored to make your RL. Glad you connected with this write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Oof! That last line! *gulp*

Milton once said, "The mind can make a hell of heaven and a heaven of hell." Maybe one day humanity will get that.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. It was a very heavy write to compose. That last line is very haunting indeed. Maybe one day, all we can do is hope. Appreciate you.

Damian  

You've reminded me of the first girl I ever took to a movie (Excalibur, 1981)

She was one of our class of '82 valedictorians; a beautiful girl with a beautiful mind,
and a year after graduation she was killed in an automobile accident.

Just the wastefulness of it all was staggering.

Thanks so much for reading and your commentary, MS. Honored to make your RL. That's a story that pulls hard at my heartstrings, my friend. So sorry that happened, it sucks when life gives us a bitter pill to swallow. Appreciate you.

Damian    

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this message of a beautiful tribute to the deepness of Scarlett love gone but yet never truly forgotten 😭🪬 SHAMAN 🪬

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, SHAMAN. Glad you connected with this write. Much respect, brother poet. Appreciate you.

Damian

Sometimes we will remember that time in our lives 🙏 as it was something that was created to be reminded of a beautiful time 💕🪬 SHAMAN 🪬📿🪷🙏🪬

Oh my...I remember once writing about a mermaid in love with the moon. No matter what, they'll never be together. It was a silly poem but the emotions evoked by such a situation as this (or that silly one) pulls hard on the heart strings. And that last line is like a sledgehammer to the cranium...powerful

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. It was a very heavy piece to write indeed. Glad you could relate to this write. The last line was very bone chilling to me. Appreciate you.

Damian