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light cannot be restrained
watch how she moves
so graceful...
despite the pain
& it's a constant
always trying to force her into submission
yet she maintains her composure
knocking at each door
making sure voices are heard
then uncapping her own bottle
pouring ink in equal measure
her playful nature...
...& her agony
into concoctions & lyrical cocktails
alternating honesty with entertaining
wholly relatable
as we laugh at her word play
& lose coherent speech
when she bares herself
despite fear & awkward self-image
cringing inside
...but determined
because she's fully aware
when she speaks...
so many of us feel seen
she's a radiant being
& light cannot be contained
it always finds accessible fractures
creating a living beacon
making her glow visible
...to everyone around her
whatever you do...
don't take her for granted...
Duende is so much more
...than she appears
Written by
WillowsWhimsies
Published 28th Nov 2024
| Edited 26th Dec 2024
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Re. light cannot be restrained
28th Nov 2024 1:04pm
I. am. at. loss. for. words. This is breathtakingly beautiful, sweet sister mine.
& moved me deeply, it's amazing how you're able to capture the essence of me.
"her playful nature...
...& her agony" > I love that you highlight both sides :-)
I'm grateful beyond words to have met you. You're the most loving, empathic and supportive woman I've ever met. A brilliant poetess and a fierce warrior. I love you, sis 💖
& moved me deeply, it's amazing how you're able to capture the essence of me.
"her playful nature...
...& her agony" > I love that you highlight both sides :-)
I'm grateful beyond words to have met you. You're the most loving, empathic and supportive woman I've ever met. A brilliant poetess and a fierce warrior. I love you, sis 💖
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Re: Re. light cannot be restrained
5th Dec 2024 1:35am
"I'm grateful beyond words to have met you. You're the most loving, empathic and supportive woman I've ever met. A brilliant poetess and a fierce warrior"
You just said exactly how I feel about you, sis 💖
You just said exactly how I feel about you, sis 💖
Re. light cannot be restrained
28th Nov 2024 2:04pm
Happy Thanksgiving beautiful Willow this write is exquistie as the woman herself I love Duende ❤️
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5th Dec 2024 1:36am
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Re. light cannot be restrained
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Re. light cannot be restrained
28th Nov 2024 9:10pm
I knew from the moment I read her poem when she returned to DUP that my life wouldn’t be the same. You captured D perfectly💕
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Re. light cannot be restrained
29th Nov 2024 4:31am
Beautifully written, Willow. Into the list it belongs. Such a beautiful tribute to an amazing lady, and a brilliant poetess. Duende, is one of a kind for sure. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. light cannot be restrained
5th Dec 2024 1:38am
Been my rock solid little sister since we met here on the site. She's a true gem ❤️
Re. light cannot be restrained
29th Nov 2024 12:05pm
This is absolutely amazing, Willow! And it describes Duende to a T! You are kicking ass and taking names in this comp!
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Re: Re. light cannot be restrained
5th Dec 2024 1:39am
We're pretty inseparable & I wouldn't pass an opportunity to give her the honour she deserves ❤️
Re. light cannot be restrained
1st Dec 2024 00:43am
It's such a joy to see such admiration amongst writers. This write, as well as the several others along this theme.
But, this one... to lift another up, out of sheer kindness, is truly godsent. We never have to be alone here. And people like you, Willow, are the pillars that holds it upright. But yeah, you.
Well done. Well deserved for Duende, as well.
But, this one... to lift another up, out of sheer kindness, is truly godsent. We never have to be alone here. And people like you, Willow, are the pillars that holds it upright. But yeah, you.
Well done. Well deserved for Duende, as well.
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Re: Re. light cannot be restrained
5th Dec 2024 1:41am
Duende has been one of my 4 pillars here since the beginning. My little spirit sister. She deserves all this & so much more ❤️
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