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I saw the most beautiful girl today
I saw the most beautiful girl today,
a million flaws and all,
hard to think some people,
are actually human with faults,
a million flaws and all,
hard to think some people,
are actually human with faults,
Published 20th May 2012
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Anonymous
21st May 2012 4:57am
Simple yet very effective and with great meaning.
Strider
Strider
17th Jun 2012 2:32am
17th Jun 2012 2:36am
The simplicity helps keep this poem alot. You go by the old saying "Less is more" Great job.
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