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Betty's Shine

 
lovely lady exciting us all
a passionate flower living life in bloom
love and love loss  
painfully aware of her intimate need
she opens the door  
to a great understanding of desire
I've never experienced, love like this
 
in wonder, I've examined each scar and freckle
listening as her heart broke
like voyuer, watch as she made her love moves
 
a Goddess to my eyes, because she lights the room with starlight
beaming images of a love so intense it burns and glows
in wonder, I look on wishing my desire was so fierce
 
I worship her, as she seduced us all one by one
in high heels and a dare she sashays through life
locking horns with love
see she has the guts to take the beauty with the ugly
and even her bad days are alive with beauty
 
they speak to my heart
I've fallen is love with her
Betty, it's not hard to see why
beauty queen and woman of understanding
struck by your matter of fact style
 
I noticed you right away
if a woman can swagger you did
I watch from afar and just stare
drinking you in in large gulps
like a woman parched
 
sipping from your breast
in tenderness you reach out to me
a superstar in my eyes
there is no other Betty
we are blessed to know you
 
 
 
Written by crimsin (Unveiling)
Published | Edited 9th Dec 2024
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