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On Life Journey I Keep Trying
Along with my ego side by side walking
Not ego driven on life journey I keep trying
Carried away by its powers soul losing
A risk of the infection of perfection attaining
A beauty in disguise my self I keep reminding
A challenging inner struggle worth leading
Delving into ego complexities soul transforming
In rivers of inner harmony how I long bathing
Not ego driven on life journey I keep trying
Carried away by its powers soul losing
A risk of the infection of perfection attaining
A beauty in disguise my self I keep reminding
A challenging inner struggle worth leading
Delving into ego complexities soul transforming
In rivers of inner harmony how I long bathing
Published 27th Nov 2024
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27th Nov 2024 11:56am
27th Nov 2024 1:25pm
How wonderful of you to read my humble words and beautifully comment! My pleasure! Thank you so much! Stay blessed.
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27th Nov 2024 1:26pm
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27th Nov 2024 7:47pm
Hoi hoi
It is always a feast to read your work.
And look how it resonates with DUP’ers.
I think it’s your gift to us.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
It is always a feast to read your work.
And look how it resonates with DUP’ers.
I think it’s your gift to us.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
28th Nov 2024 9:40am
How kind of you to highly value my humble poetry by your graceful presence and wonderful praising feedback! Thank you heaps for your great support and appreciative comment! God bless you.
29th Nov 2024 3:18pm
Thank you, my beautiful smiling lady for reminding us that life is lived one step at a time. Hugs and love, Oral
29th Nov 2024 3:36pm
Deeply humbled by your wonderful words and your kindness.. always an honour and a pleasure to receive your great support.. Thank you so much! Stay always blessed.
Not ego driven. narcissism is sickness. that blinds the mind and the heart.empathy saves people so many heart aches and depression,as to be sociable with smiling face will surely heal
so many sick people...
Good read My Smile; with a self respect and trust, and reliance thru being so humble and comprehensive..
Stay blessed and active for ever.Hamid
so many sick people...
Good read My Smile; with a self respect and trust, and reliance thru being so humble and comprehensive..
Stay blessed and active for ever.Hamid
2nd Dec 2024 5:23pm
I always look up to your honest response to my humble poetry and reflections.. thank you so much for so beautiful and insightful feedback! Always an immense pleasure reading you.. Stay always blessed and happy. God bless you.
