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This Life
In spite of all the danger
Pray to the Heaven's above
Packed in life's container
What's the meaning of?
Applause the final curtain
Taking your final puff
Spectators serving sermons
All in the name of love
Pray to the Heaven's above
Packed in life's container
What's the meaning of?
Applause the final curtain
Taking your final puff
Spectators serving sermons
All in the name of love
Published 20th Nov 2024
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20th Nov 2024 8:54am
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20th Nov 2024 2:06pm
hello dearest Pete you always write such clever writes... I wonder are they watching you take your last puff in anticipation of you final hour? great write in any case...❤️
20th Nov 2024 2:26pm
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22nd Nov 2024 10:53pm
I got questions...not the least of which is what are they puffing? So much done in the name of love. But is it really? Clever little thought provoker here...
23rd Nov 2024 00:04am
Hi Willow, you'll find some of mine are because I just love wordplay, when I read it back, there are a few interpretations but in a nutshell I was trying to put the meaning of life in 8 lines lol 🙃♥️
