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Lost Souls _ with "Adagio"
sunken within the consuming mist,
eyes turning blear,
mind clouded and vision dull
of lost souls in pantomime near,
echoing a fallen tear
hanging on to a shadow's hull.
eyes turning blear,
mind clouded and vision dull
of lost souls in pantomime near,
echoing a fallen tear
hanging on to a shadow's hull.
Published 19th Nov 2024
Author's Note
your mind is a treasure, Adagio.
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19th Nov 2024 7:57pm
this is interesting we are similar wavelengths today I just wrote a death poem inspired by Sage's painting in the gallery ❤️ where people have numerals on their heads... this is really good you two...
19th Nov 2024 10:57pm
numerals on their heads.. that's such a brilliant viewpoint. and i've yet to read. we thank you, Crimsin.
20th Nov 2024 6:17am
Fantastic write, Lilli & Adagio. Great collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
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20th Nov 2024 3:27pm
