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Random Thought
Another sleepless night wrecks the day
Without remedy insanity could take hold
Creating empty hearts molded from clay
While fragile minds turn desperately bold
Hasty decisions breed irrational thought
One step closer to finding who’s at fault
It’s not considered a lie if never caught
Emotions are victims of spiritual assault
Time is an enemy that exposes mortality
It’s human nature to wanna cheat death
Putting faith in technology to alter reality
In hopes of never taking that final breath
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Without remedy insanity could take hold
Creating empty hearts molded from clay
While fragile minds turn desperately bold
Hasty decisions breed irrational thought
One step closer to finding who’s at fault
It’s not considered a lie if never caught
Emotions are victims of spiritual assault
Time is an enemy that exposes mortality
It’s human nature to wanna cheat death
Putting faith in technology to alter reality
In hopes of never taking that final breath
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. Some thoughts are very random. I just came back from a great weekend hanging with my brother, and somehow I end up here. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" We don't come alone
We are fire, we are stone
We're the hand that writes
Then quickly moves away."
- Ronnie James Dio
- Damian DeadLove
" We don't come alone
We are fire, we are stone
We're the hand that writes
Then quickly moves away."
- Ronnie James Dio
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Re. Random Thought
18th Nov 2024 6:59am
This is very real in what it alludes to. Death, addiction, emotions, etc. It's such realization that to me shows that people need each other, in embrace, to create quality of life, and have hope further beyond mortality, and create blessings and happiness within the current purpose and truth of humanity. Life is all about relationships - even your own with yourself. The thing about some of your ideas here, on an emotional scale, is that they imply a lot of lonely struggles. Overall, solid job. Again, I like your brevity and technique of writing. Thanks for sharing!
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19th Nov 2024 5:05am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, brother. Always dig your analysis, I feel like I learn something about myself and style every time you write one. Appreciate you.
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19th Nov 2024 5:18am
I just point out some of what I see. I have absolutely no idea the inspiration and process of how you put this into perspective. With that said, it's great to get interpretation from other artists, or simply, a reader. It offers, like you said, a new experience to learn. You're very skilled with the pen. Appreciate you back! Take care!
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18th Nov 2024 9:24am
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19th Nov 2024 5:06am
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18th Nov 2024 9:46am
if lack of sleep makes someone insane, have me fitted for my straight jacket.
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19th Nov 2024 5:07am
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18th Nov 2024 10:28am
A great poem here my friend. Well written, creating deep thoughts for the reader.
Oh & a classic quote from RJD.
Oh & a classic quote from RJD.
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19th Nov 2024 5:09am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. It is a classic line, from a great song. Appreciate you.
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Re. Random Thought
18th Nov 2024 10:45am
I appreciate your thoughts on this message of random thought a very interesting and relatable story 👍✍️🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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19th Nov 2024 5:10am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, SHAMAN. Much respect, brother poet. Appreciate you.
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19th Nov 2024 8:03pm
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18th Nov 2024 11:12am
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19th Nov 2024 5:11am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
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18th Nov 2024 11:33am
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19th Nov 2024 5:13am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
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18th Nov 2024 12:12pm
Sleep deprivation can really mess up your mind, makes it hard to not lose your sanity.
"Emotions are victims of spiritual assault" > speechless, this line is simply brilliant.
Stunning piece, my friend, I appreciate you.
"Emotions are victims of spiritual assault" > speechless, this line is simply brilliant.
Stunning piece, my friend, I appreciate you.
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19th Nov 2024 5:15am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. I'm glad you liked the write, my friend. I loved that line as well. Appreciate you.
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Re. Random Thought
18th Nov 2024 9:48pm
Emotions are victims of spiritual assault
That right there was an anchor! Astute observation, Damian.
That right there was an anchor! Astute observation, Damian.
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19th Nov 2024 5:17am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. Love that line as well. I always have a favorite line or lines, in every write. Appreciate you.
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Re. Random Thought
19th Nov 2024 10:46am
This very well written poem underscores the human journey through challenges, self-discovery, and the perpetual quest for meaning. It celebrates our ability to persevere, evolve, and find light even in the most trying of times. Well done my friend.
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20th Nov 2024 5:50am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. I totally agree with your analysis my friend. Appreciate you.
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Re. Random Thought
19th Nov 2024 10:19pm
The way this brushes against the mind & stirs thoughts of my own is interesting. Much nonsense is done when not thinking straight, whether it's from lack of sleep or something else chemical. And when we're not thinking straight, emotions usually take the wheel. Not always a good driver. Appreciate you & your musings, DL
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20th Nov 2024 5:54am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. I'm glad you connected with the write. I agree with you my friend. Appreciate you.
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