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glowing aura
under the velvety sky
a beautiful shadow
is dancing in my arms
the darkness is growing
nd my desires want
to fly in it with a spark
i feel the strain fade away
i breathe slowly
i smell him
the darkness has
caught hold of my knees tightly
it has painted my world
with warmth
soothing tunes echoing
in the cozy blanket
the soft white light
is seeping into cleft
there is a peace in it
there is a promise in it...
a beautiful shadow
is dancing in my arms
the darkness is growing
nd my desires want
to fly in it with a spark
i feel the strain fade away
i breathe slowly
i smell him
the darkness has
caught hold of my knees tightly
it has painted my world
with warmth
soothing tunes echoing
in the cozy blanket
the soft white light
is seeping into cleft
there is a peace in it
there is a promise in it...
Published 17th Nov 2024
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17th Nov 2024 11:55am
you captures the interplay between light and darkness, evoking a sense of intimacy and tranquility. while the dance of shadows and the embrace of darkness symbolize both comfort and desire. The transition from strain to peace reflects a profound emotional journey, ultimately suggesting that even in darkness, there is warmth and promise. It's a lovely exploration of finding solace in the complexities of life.
17th Nov 2024 12:20pm
An interplay of desire, strength and vulnerability, there is a captivating mix in your formulation of the poem that offers a bold exploration of human connection.
17th Nov 2024 12:31pm
I echo Moroccanpoet's comment. The painting picture evokes that intimacy of night time.
17th Nov 2024 4:32pm
