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Gatecrashed

I decided one fine day
To visit the faraway land of fae
I'd planned to go their on my own
My venture into this twilight zone
As a treat, instead of camping
I affoeded myself the luxury of glamping
I told of my plan with friends
And that's where i should of let it end
Then one suggested one misty day
Could they join me in the land of fae
I agreed it would perhaps be better, than alone
As we planned to enter the twilight zone
Then this person said would it be okay to bring a friend
So i adjusted the cost, equally to spend
Then one more decided to join in
At this point there were smiles, and the odd grin
So i ordered extra bedding, and extra beds
And printed out the costs, so no-one felt bled
A few years later now, one thinks they paid to much
As they have found a way to pay a lower 'touch'
If i go again, i'll go alone
Venturingb within my own twilight zone
It hurts me deep down inside
Any suggestion that ive lied
The only reason to hear their noises
As none of us kept copies of invoices
Now feels like all trust
Has gone bust
As i lie here with a cough
I cannot contain, that i'm really pissed off
At the time, we were all hail, and hearty
Forgotten is the fact you gatecrashed my party!

by Jemia
Written by missjem56 (Jemia de Blondeville)
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