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Avid Readers Staring into Glory at 1600 Central; myself

They rest atop a smoothly weathered rock with intials carved in its face from a time long since quietly forsaken. Amidst the dying leaves they bask in a chasm of words between better left unsaid as it’s nourished by the tacit bond of the experience the two share. The sun recedes in jaded capitulation behind the foothills to the sunken west. Before I can indulge an internal inkling of misanthropic malice with which to cast aspersions she reaches her rays as if to lay a calming hand o’er my heart.  
 
 
I  
start away, sauntering  
without aim. Soon I’ swallowed,    
immersed in the  
totality of long  
shadows  
east through  
towering Tennessee  
Pines. Sure  
enough, the  
cold mountain wind  
re-inters those—  
darker  
elements to the  
black  
dirt of my  
heart.
Written by Alois_inwriting02 (Alois Cyprien d Bayeux)
Published | Edited 19th Nov 2024
Author's Note
I initially wanted to go a different direction with this and ended up attempting some off-the wall shit with respect to the stylistic precedent I’ve set in previous work. A friend of mine calls the first style I attempted "prosaic brutalism", after the architectural style. The idea is vivid imagery integrated with minimal punctuation. Hope you can enjoy (or make sense of it (because you can only pick one))
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