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Jaded
She walks the world no longer outwardly wounded
Her heart vacant
Her desires an inscribed scroll she carries in her soul
Each marked upon completion
A pound of flesh for a pound of lost innocence
Her heart vacant
Her desires an inscribed scroll she carries in her soul
Each marked upon completion
A pound of flesh for a pound of lost innocence
Published 14th Nov 2024
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14th Nov 2024 12:23pm
Your poem conveys a deep sense of emotional weariness and introspection. it’s a poignant reflection on the costs of experience and the scars we carry. Well done!
14th Nov 2024 1:54pm
14th Nov 2024 2:36pm
good morning beautiful Her this is a really deep write
there are still many layers of innocence inside us I believe
it is harder to acess after the scars but it remains ❤️
there are still many layers of innocence inside us I believe
it is harder to acess after the scars but it remains ❤️
14th Nov 2024 3:15pm
Feels like forever since my thoughts felt innocent.
This deeply resonated with me
Great depth.
This deeply resonated with me
Great depth.
14th Nov 2024 4:37pm
This is as dire as it is resounding. A very nice emotional balance for the reader.
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- Edited 14th Nov 2024 6:04pm
14th Nov 2024 4:53pm
Love it. How to fill the vacunt spaces, right?!? Very deep…
14th Nov 2024 10:44pm
Yesterday 10:23pm
I'm not entirely convinced innocence is all it's cracked up to be. Seems to be the magnet that draws the vipers. But I love the little girl I was before the jading...as I love yours
Yesterday 10:26pm
