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National Lobotomy
Fucking fools got one party rule
to goose-step the necks of motley thought
wherever the people's genius is taught
but especially in public school
where they don't hang enough pictures of Christ
with the hipster hair and funeral gown
or the shoulder cross and the thorny crown
ghoulishly hoping for a soul to heist
and then to teach it in private lessons
about la-di-da in the great beyond
due to all the guns of which they are fond
such as your choice of Smith and Wessons
because no one scrolls like Bible doomers
to overpay the death cultist groomers.
to goose-step the necks of motley thought
wherever the people's genius is taught
but especially in public school
where they don't hang enough pictures of Christ
with the hipster hair and funeral gown
or the shoulder cross and the thorny crown
ghoulishly hoping for a soul to heist
and then to teach it in private lessons
about la-di-da in the great beyond
due to all the guns of which they are fond
such as your choice of Smith and Wessons
because no one scrolls like Bible doomers
to overpay the death cultist groomers.
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Re. National Lobotomy
12th Nov 2024 11:51pm
Re: Re. National Lobotomy
12th Nov 2024 11:58pm
Hey I just don't know how folks roll around here anymore. Maybe I should tag all my political poems as BDSM.
Re. National Lobotomy
13th Nov 2024 1:21am
Nice poem. One party, eh? Not sure.
But I do know that the "right" wing and the "left" wing belong to the same bird.
But I do know that the "right" wing and the "left" wing belong to the same bird.
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Re: Re. National Lobotomy
13th Nov 2024 1:40am
Last I saw MAGA is gonna get all three federal branches, and while I'd like to say that's enough governmental rope to hang themselves, I fear the ruination that will precede it.
I get why folks think there isn't a difference between the parties but that's like trying to convince me that there's no such thing as nuance.
I get why folks think there isn't a difference between the parties but that's like trying to convince me that there's no such thing as nuance.
Re. National Lobotomy
13th Nov 2024 2:40am
You write exquisitely with great truth. No way are you getting banned.
Not allowing it!
Not allowing it!
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Re: Re. National Lobotomy
13th Nov 2024 3:06am
Thank you 🙏
I'm just at a point where I expect another shoe to drop, so to speak.
I'm just at a point where I expect another shoe to drop, so to speak.
Re: Re. National Lobotomy
13th Nov 2024 3:17am
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13th Nov 2024 3:55am
Re. National Lobotomy
13th Nov 2024 3:38am
Certain visuals here unmistakably reflect the sentiments of many people around me. What happens when there is popular sentiment to go after Socrates? What is being proposed about weeding out generals doesn’t make me feel any better.
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Re: Re. National Lobotomy
13th Nov 2024 4:04am
We Americans aren't used to using words like "pogram" but that's exactly what MAGA is saying that they want to do, or at least a less severe version of that, like what the U.S. did with the Japanese in 1942, who were actually citizens, and not migrants.
I don't know why folks aren't more unnerved by that kind of MAGA talk, other than they are massively heartless about the history of their own nation.
I don't know why folks aren't more unnerved by that kind of MAGA talk, other than they are massively heartless about the history of their own nation.
Re. National Lobotomy
13th Nov 2024 3:36pm
You mentioned being banned. Have you received some kind of warning? I see your work as provocative and critical of US politics but has not violated community standards. To my understanding people have been banned for plagiarism, harassment and possibly using AI. Keep writing, if people don’t like your work then they should read it. I like it and agree so will keep reading
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Re: Re. National Lobotomy
13th Nov 2024 3:51pm
I was thinking along the lines of an inevitable national ban on anything anti-fascist since the Trumpanzees can't handle criticism of any sort, so not so much DUP, at least not now, but who knows where the DUP speech freedom affiliations are at, or where they'll wind up?
I have no clue who owns this platform.
I have no clue who owns this platform.
Re: Re. National Lobotomy
14th Nov 2024 1:17am
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Re. National Lobotomy
16th Nov 2024 6:06pm
I read this a couple of days and put it on my RL because I knew it's one of those I'd come back and re-read it over and over again.
I'd like imagine Jesus somewhere up in heaven, hand over his forehead saying "oh my dad, what the fuck? who are these people?"
I'd like imagine Jesus somewhere up in heaven, hand over his forehead saying "oh my dad, what the fuck? who are these people?"
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16th Nov 2024 9:23pm