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Addicted
I'm addicted to choc
Red roses too
Designer lace frocks
Trendy and new
Handbags... fine wines
Expensive shoes
Most of all YOU!
When you light up my fuse
Red roses too
Designer lace frocks
Trendy and new
Handbags... fine wines
Expensive shoes
Most of all YOU!
When you light up my fuse
Published 11th Nov 2024
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2024 10:40am
Awesome, Pete
11th Nov 2024 11:16am
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11th Nov 2024 2:21pm
hello dearest Pete I love that you chose Marlyin for your photo this is really great in a fun way ❤️
11th Nov 2024 3:06pm
11th Nov 2024 8:11pm
Do you wear lace frocks ? 😉 May be for role plays...lol.just kidding
Wonderful piece ,dear 💕
Wonderful piece ,dear 💕
11th Nov 2024 8:27pm
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12th Nov 2024 3:52am
Beautiful write, Pete. Love how you got in touch with your feminine side on this one. lol. Seriously though it's an excellent poem. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
12th Nov 2024 9:57am
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15th Nov 2024 10:07pm
That image is perfect for this piece! She had so much pinache, vivacity. I felt that in your words
