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The Gift Of Having You
Whom would I first address
and my veneration would express
The one who patiently me nursed
and who rendered me well versed
Shall I name who embraced my first cry
whole nights with no blink of an eye
Shall I cite who sweated blood to meet my breeding
whole days out burning to earn my feeding
Two dear familiar faces my first sight
growing with memories in my heart so bright
Mum and Dad for me you are the one
my first and only, second to none
The gift of having you long for granted taken
the evidence of losing you woe waken
My consolation what I write of you each at a time
my poetry I honour uniting both of you in a rhyme.
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Re. The Gift Of Having You
8th Nov 2024 7:45pm
This is so heart touching . Most of us don't know how to express our love to our parents ..
I am one of them.
Thank you for writing this.
I am one of them.
Thank you for writing this.
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9th Nov 2024 2:16pm
That's my pleasure my poetry speaks to your heart.. Parents are so dear.. how can we meet all that grant us.. A lump in my throat i didn't show how much I love them and how precious they are.. Thank you so much for your kind feedback ! Stay always blessed.
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9th Nov 2024 11:22am
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9th Nov 2024 2:23pm
How generous of you dear Grace to beautifully comment on my humble words! You are of remarkable humility to sincerely praise what I write of poetry.. Thank you so much! God bless you.
Re. The Gift Of Having You
9th Nov 2024 6:32pm
Your smile is BEAUTIFUL, and your poetry matches it. Hugs and love, Oral
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10th Nov 2024 8:08am
Deeply humbled and grateful to you for such a kind feedback.. Thank you so much. God bless you.
Re. The Gift Of Having You
10th Nov 2024 4:59am
Dear B,
A beautiful homage to parents. How blessed you all are to have each other. I can think of no other honor to give thanks than to poetically gift your love for one another. This is so sweet and touching. H🌷
A beautiful homage to parents. How blessed you all are to have each other. I can think of no other honor to give thanks than to poetically gift your love for one another. This is so sweet and touching. H🌷
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10th Nov 2024 8:11am
And how blessed I am to have you a so beautiful soul of deep sensitivity and generosity.. Thank you so much for such a rewarding response to my humble poetry.. I highly value your great support. Stay always blessed.
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11th Nov 2024 2:50pm
So much obliged to you for the honour of your visit and the beauty of your feedback ! Stay always blessed.
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14th Nov 2024 11:02pm
Re. The Gift Of Having You
Parents are the precious thing in our life, we cant do without them, even when adult and mature, as they see us always their little sons and daughters,
We never can be up to their level, but we can at least write a word or two for their honour and to show them how much we love them..
Very heartfelt poem Besma you know how to render the most lovable persons in our lives.
hamid best regards.
We never can be up to their level, but we can at least write a word or two for their honour and to show them how much we love them..
Very heartfelt poem Besma you know how to render the most lovable persons in our lives.
hamid best regards.
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11th Nov 2024 3:56pm
Our parents will ever remain in us.. we are from them.. we are grateful to them.. losing them when they and we are young hurts deeply..
I have rendered nothing to them.. they left before I could do that to them.. I know that what they give could not be measured or rendered.. but it is just to get that sweet feeling of making them happy and satisfied..
Thank you so much for your words of beauty and feeling.. God bless you.
I have rendered nothing to them.. they left before I could do that to them.. I know that what they give could not be measured or rendered.. but it is just to get that sweet feeling of making them happy and satisfied..
Thank you so much for your words of beauty and feeling.. God bless you.