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darling...who is always in my prayers and complaints

it was a crowd of strangers
it was a fleeting moment
when we exchanged smiles
it was a quiet meeting
in which two worlds wanted to add colour
i left my footprints in
his courtyard
n turning away from there
spark ran through my body
to touch his rough lips
in a few seconds of meeting,
that face made its place in my eyes
my soul was touching
his soul with tenderness
his spiritual eyes
had hypnotized me
and a dripping virgin stream
starts flowing through me...
i would say
it was a pure moment
when the green-blue oceans,
laden with salty, sweet beauty,
danced to merge into one another...

Written by dimpy

(dimpsmoon)

Published 8th Nov 2024

#emotions #love #strength

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Re. darling...who is always in my prayers and complaints

PoetSpeak

8th Nov 2024 12:58pm

Immaculate passion
One of your best and that says a lot because your poems speak to the reader in roar of desire ...

BIG

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dimpy (dimpsmoon)

8th Nov 2024 2:25pm

thank you so much artist for including my writing in your list and nominating me in poem of the month... really it is unbelievable...last time Styxian did made me so happy by nominating me....even if I don't become the winner, but being nominated is also equal to winning... Thank you from the bottom of my heart dear heart❤