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happy birthday
artist...
who soaks
the canvas
with sensual colors...
whose words'
curves make
the page attractive...
whose
existence
entered the world
amidst the brightest candles...
who is
successful
in turning life's
hard frozen lake
into a smooth waterfall...
whose
purity and
cool moisture
touches my face
despite being so far away...
whose
bright light
nourishes my hopes...
n the
one
my world waits for...
who soaks
the canvas
with sensual colors...
whose words'
curves make
the page attractive...
whose
existence
entered the world
amidst the brightest candles...
who is
successful
in turning life's
hard frozen lake
into a smooth waterfall...
whose
purity and
cool moisture
touches my face
despite being so far away...
whose
bright light
nourishes my hopes...
n the
one
my world waits for...
Published 5th Nov 2024
Author's Note
token of love...
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5th Nov 2024 5:52pm
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5th Nov 2024 8:43pm
Thank you dimpy
I'm speechless and that's rare but ...
I'm honored by your poem.
It's been a challenging year in many respects.
I appreciate your words and kindness
Heart ❤
I'm speechless and that's rare but ...
I'm honored by your poem.
It's been a challenging year in many respects.
I appreciate your words and kindness
Heart ❤
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
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6th Nov 2024 3:42pm
Thank you Brenda
dimpy honored me with her pen
I am humbled and in awe of her generosity..
dimpy honored me with her pen
I am humbled and in awe of her generosity..
6th Nov 2024 3:08am
Beautiful write, dimpy. What a wonderful birthday poem. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
6th Nov 2024 3:42am
Wonderful poem, dimpy
Your admiration for your muse is beautifully expressed.
Happy birthday, PS.
From one survivor of the big C to another, here’s to conquering challenges and moving into a new year with a renewed spirit.
Thanks for being you💕
Your admiration for your muse is beautifully expressed.
Happy birthday, PS.
From one survivor of the big C to another, here’s to conquering challenges and moving into a new year with a renewed spirit.
Thanks for being you💕
6th Nov 2024 4:50am
thanks everyone for reading and liking my stuff...ahavati and artist, I wish that both of you create better memories in your future life...stay healthy and happy... once again happy birthday to both of you...
