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I Do Not Agree With Reality
I am alive.
Open my body, what do you find?
Periods and question marks.
A useless hide.
A meat sack of trivial answers and lies.
Locks of hair entangling my mind.
Wading through emotional turmoil tides.
Combing through the who's and why's.
Leaving all of reality behind.
I'm just a cunt. Some useless meat.
Come prize me as your specialty.
I'll give you your dose of prime protein.
And fatten you with psychological schemes.
Keep me alive in your dreams.
Keep me close, don't try to hide.
Keep me wet, squeaky and clean.
Keep me exposed; opened wide.
I am alive, for you to question.
Make a statement and you are wrong.
What you think is the lesson.
I've been leading you astray all along.
I'm your world of your creation.
That cunt that always lies.
I'm the beast you're hunting for predation.
While I mimick my enemies crimes.
Open my body, what do you find?
Accusations and remarks.
You're wrong to trust your own creation.
It's your mind that's in the dark. ;)
Open my body, what do you find?
Periods and question marks.
A useless hide.
A meat sack of trivial answers and lies.
Locks of hair entangling my mind.
Wading through emotional turmoil tides.
Combing through the who's and why's.
Leaving all of reality behind.
I'm just a cunt. Some useless meat.
Come prize me as your specialty.
I'll give you your dose of prime protein.
And fatten you with psychological schemes.
Keep me alive in your dreams.
Keep me close, don't try to hide.
Keep me wet, squeaky and clean.
Keep me exposed; opened wide.
I am alive, for you to question.
Make a statement and you are wrong.
What you think is the lesson.
I've been leading you astray all along.
I'm your world of your creation.
That cunt that always lies.
I'm the beast you're hunting for predation.
While I mimick my enemies crimes.
Open my body, what do you find?
Accusations and remarks.
You're wrong to trust your own creation.
It's your mind that's in the dark. ;)
Written by
AfterSexDilemma
Published 1st Nov 2024
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Re. I Do Not Agree With Reality
1st Nov 2024 11:42am
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1st Nov 2024 11:48am
Awwwe thanks but no. You have to pay the admission price like everyone else. Get in line!
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1st Nov 2024 12:00pm
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1st Nov 2024 12:52pm
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1st Nov 2024 12:48pm
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1st Nov 2024 12:52pm
Hahaha alright you get first since vision is being a butthole. Teehee!
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1st Nov 2024 4:43pm
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1st Nov 2024 1:14pm
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1st Nov 2024 1:18pm
Hahaha you can always join the party! Thanks for the RLE glad you enjoyed!
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1st Nov 2024 1:37pm
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Re. I Do Not Agree With Reality
1st Nov 2024 5:00pm
A marvelously accurate existentialist summation, with the comment section for a Last Brooklyn Exit gang style emphasis.
Remarkable!
Remarkable!
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Re: Re. I Do Not Agree With Reality
1st Nov 2024 5:14pm
Hahaha if you were expecting normal people to understand that, think again. Thanks for the feedback! You're great!
Re. I Do Not Agree With Reality
1st Nov 2024 5:25pm
I love how you speak, how you say it, its direct and strong and no scope to twisted meaning.
Nice spill..Hamid
Nice spill..Hamid
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1st Nov 2024 5:30pm
Re: Re. I Do Not Agree With Reality
2nd Nov 2024 1:38am
This one has that pop song quality about it but I found myself wincing at the names you've been calling yourself. This was that quality I was kinda tapping into:
"Locks of hair entangling my mind.
Wading through emotional turmoil tides.
Combing through the who's and why's.
Leaving all of reality behind." 😊
"Locks of hair entangling my mind.
Wading through emotional turmoil tides.
Combing through the who's and why's.
Leaving all of reality behind." 😊
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2nd Nov 2024 1:43am
Hahaha it is meant to be educational not insulting. Cunt literally means a useless piece of meat termed by butchers. People just use the word in slang form. Interesting you think of it in song form. It is actually referring to witchcraft before it was demonized. Or just simply changing your perspective on reality towards a positive outlook rather than negative. Supposed to be inspirational. Thanks for your thoughts!
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2nd Nov 2024 1:49am
Lol. I didn't really know what the poem was driving at. That's why I was hesitant to comment. Even so, I don't think you should be referring to yourself as a useless piece of meat. You are far from that! 😊
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2nd Nov 2024 2:03am
Lol well spirituality is all about accepting that you are just a divine entity inside a meat sack. So it's just more outwardly saying it rather than wasting time on semantics but thank you! Lol
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2nd Nov 2024 2:08am
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9th Nov 2024 1:25pm
Awesome! I love the playfulness of the poem, coupled with some clever rhyming and imagery. A winner in my book.
Mundus
Mundus
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9th Nov 2024 1:34pm
Re. I Do Not Agree With Reality
10th Nov 2024 9:53am
Reminds of a quote by Agnes Varda, “If we opened people up, we'd find landscapes. If we opened me up, we'd find beaches.”
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10th Nov 2024 1:38pm
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10th Nov 2024 2:30pm
Whichever or whomever you are, it's supposed to be about you. I would be an ocean: deep, powerful and seductive.
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10th Nov 2024 2:33pm
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10th Nov 2024 2:40pm
:D As in the words of Walt Whitman, "As the sea pushes on land, with love, with love." I can engulf you, leaving salt on your lips, keeping you thirsty for more.
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10th Nov 2024 2:43pm
Hahahaha you are now sentenced to life in prison for murdering people with salty love !
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