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Fall
It’s that time of year.
When hot chocolate is being made
Cozy movies are being watched.
Friends become lovers to keep the other warm.
The fires in the fireplace are being lit.
The day’s crucial events do not seem so crucial.
Cuddling together
One laying on the lap of the other while hair is stroked
In the silence of the room
You close your eyes and listen to the sound.
Breath’s in and out lulling you into serenity.
A downy light touch on the neck creates a slow hum within
Neither one realizes the event is being recorded
In the storage facility called the mind
To be pulled out at will
When the day and time calls it forth
As if the ticking of a nonexistent watch
Struck the perfect time.
Lips meet
Soul’s caress
Desire blooms
When hot chocolate is being made
Cozy movies are being watched.
Friends become lovers to keep the other warm.
The fires in the fireplace are being lit.
The day’s crucial events do not seem so crucial.
Cuddling together
One laying on the lap of the other while hair is stroked
In the silence of the room
You close your eyes and listen to the sound.
Breath’s in and out lulling you into serenity.
A downy light touch on the neck creates a slow hum within
Neither one realizes the event is being recorded
In the storage facility called the mind
To be pulled out at will
When the day and time calls it forth
As if the ticking of a nonexistent watch
Struck the perfect time.
Lips meet
Soul’s caress
Desire blooms
Author's Note
This is what comes up when I am left alone in a white room boxed in. The muse is in a mood
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Re. Fall
29th Oct 2024 12:56pm
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Re. Fall
29th Oct 2024 1:22pm
A downy light touch on the neck creates a slow hum within
So romantic a touch, so cozy vibes. Friendly ambience
Stay safe. Hamid
So romantic a touch, so cozy vibes. Friendly ambience
Stay safe. Hamid
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29th Oct 2024 2:22pm
Beautiful. A pleasant poem for those cooler nights. Great atmosphere!
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29th Oct 2024 2:31pm
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Re. Fall
30th Oct 2024 1:08am
Beautifully written, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
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30th Oct 2024 1:27am
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