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INCOMPLETE

JUST
as a car needs 4 wheels:
JUST
as a suit needs a coat and pants;
JUST
as a cake needs baking;
JUST
as a sentence needs syntax;
JUST
as a fish needs water;
JUST
as a kite needs wind;
JUST
as a plane needs lift;
JUST
as a plant needs water;
JUST
as a singer needs a song;
JUST
as a violin needs strings
I TOO
my love NEED YOU.
I
am INCOMPLETE without
amazing YOU!
Written by TheOralizer
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