Buried With The Dead

Sometimes a piece goes its own way, dark in this case. I had happening too. And you are right, liberty seems to become lifeless. Great piece, Damian.

Thanks so much for reading, Duende. I agree with you completely about how writes go. Appreciate you.

DL

Hi Damian DeadLove,
Your poem "Buried With The Dead" is as striking as a "death growl in an echo chamber" - to borrow your own words! The raw emotion and vivid imagery you've crafted paint a stark picture of disillusionment and lost ideals. Your use of rhyme adds a haunting rhythm that echoes the gravity of your words.
I particularly appreciated the line "Liberty hangs lifeless from some forgotten tree" - it's a powerful metaphor that encapsulates the theme of your poem beautifully. The progression from "pathetic old man" to "rats infest this land" creates a palpable sense of decay and corruption. There's a touch of Bukowski's gritty realism here, combined with Poe's dark romanticism - a potent mix indeed.
As a fellow poet who has been writing for over half a century, I admire how you've let your thoughts guide you, even into darker territory. It's this willingness to explore all aspects of human experience that often leads to the most impactful poetry. Your approach reminds me of Jim Morrison's fearless dive into the subconscious.
Your note about Ronnie James Dio's lyrics is a fitting complement to your work. Both share a sense of impending doom and societal breakdown that's particularly poignant in these times. It's clear that music and lyrics play a significant role in your poetic expression.
Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking piece. It's a reminder of poetry's power to confront difficult truths and stir our emotions. Your work exemplifies the #honesty and #PersonalGrowth themes you value.
Keep writing and exploring those late-night musings, humble enigma! Your dangerous mind is creating some powerful verse.

Thanks for reading. Appreciate you.

DL

The darkness in this poem truly captures the essence of this time of year. So good Damian. The atmosphere is haunting, eerie, unsettling. The image is perfect! An RL for you!

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Honored to make your RL. Glad you liked it. Appreciate you.

DL

Now Damian this sort of goes with what's happening to P Diddy at the moment, great piece ❤️

Thanks so much for reading, Pete. Glad you dig it. Appreciate you.

DL

Nicely Done 👍 I enjoyed how you weave this spider 🕸️ of thoughts and imagination as flow with your words ✍️👍🪬 SHAMAN 🪬

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, SHAMAN. Appreciate you.

DL

Those who idolize such people are merely crowning the king who validates their own hatred. I feel this one. To me it doesn't read dark but rather it reads illuminating. Much appreciate you & your musings

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you liked the write. Appreciate you.

DL

that's the fun part of writing. Going wherever the destination takes us.
there are times it's backwards too.
I know the ending before the beginning!

Society nowadays feels like a wasteland.
You pretty much covered it all.
Do as I say not as I do.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adelphina. Well I can't argue with that philosophy. Appreciate you.

DL  

Leaning towards epic, this.
Tight meter and rhyme scheme, with a steady driven message for all to hopefully let sink in.
Your wording is well placed, impactful even.
You're an awesome addition to DUP, and you reward us readers each time.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Styxian. That made my night and means a lot to me, brother. I'm happy to be here and enjoy not only the other poets/poetesses but their personalities. Appreciate you.

DL