The Door

It sounds far too bleak to step out of that door to be honest, Debbie. Entice me! 😉

I'm through that door. Me. Lol
Thx for reading and making me smile.

I love dark barren trees too.
It just looked like more was through the door.
Thanks for nice comment.

i'm staying inside, nice write delia

😊 I don't blame you, lol. Thx for reading and comment

Intriguing imagery enhanced by the free form rhyming structure. I like 'severely silent night' and 'paralysis of gaunt empty branches'. Cool write.

I like that wording too. Thanks so much for the comment!

Dear D,

I really enjoyed the whole premise of this write. You have some haunting images but all with fabulous possibilities that made me think about every door I enter or exit and what that portal added or subtracted from life.
Great piece. H🌷

Thank you so very much. That's exactly what I was going for in this poem
I'm glad you liked it. 😊.

Brilliantly written, Debbie. I like this a lot. Appreciate you.

DL  

Aww. Thank you so much!

Doors can resemble so much. Love the dark vibe of this one, the choices... where will it lead?

Great piece, dear poetess 💕

Thank you so very much.

The darker side of nature in this piece. Atmospheric, and quite mesmerizing. I like this poem a lot Debbie. A dark flow right into that image. Love it!

Thank you! I came across the image first and then wrote the poem.
I'm so happy you liked it.

Great composition clothed In some nocturnal mystery and a touch of gothic darkness thoroughly.
Nice work; stay thriving and prosperous, Hamid

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.  I truly appreciate it.

Nice read👌🏽

Thanks so much!

Check out some of my rhymes some time, let me know what you think👌🏽

Thx for stopping bye.

Sure I'll check out.

Somewhat chilling and thematic, given the description of how this unfolds.  I like how you tied together the various elements of a dark and silent night, almost as if foreboding or haunting, yet riveting and compelling, in wanting to read each next line.  You also leave it open for more interpretation, the way you took it in direction.  I like the visuals and raw emotion of this.  Thanks for sharing!

Hi! So nice to hear from you. I loved reading your feedback,
I always do. So thank you for that! Glad you enjoyed.

You're welcome!  This actually served as a source of inspiration for me this morning!  I wrote a poem called "A Winter Night", just going with the raw flow of this, in what I transitioned to ominous, dark, macabre, foreboding "spirit" in capturing a "cold" feeling of winter, heh.  Seriously, thanks for being a source of inspiration.