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Judgement Day
There’s a strange reflection in the mirror
Something’s different about the atmosphere
An awkward moment becomes much clearer
When guilt is tangled with alcohol and fear
Constantly obsessing over every last detail
Nightmares lurking inside a common thread
This icy eeriness rings within a guitar scale
Amidst the silence live the words never said
Confessions are admissions of mistakes made
Forgiveness is the long and winding highway
Though I’m praying for the light to never fade
Broken promises will cloud my Judgement Day
Something’s different about the atmosphere
An awkward moment becomes much clearer
When guilt is tangled with alcohol and fear
Constantly obsessing over every last detail
Nightmares lurking inside a common thread
This icy eeriness rings within a guitar scale
Amidst the silence live the words never said
Confessions are admissions of mistakes made
Forgiveness is the long and winding highway
Though I’m praying for the light to never fade
Broken promises will cloud my Judgement Day
Published 19th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. One day I will have to face Judgement. I got a feeling I'm in for a long and winding road. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" Little by little, gonna get it, I swear
One more piece of the puzzle, I'm there
Gotta get lucky gotta get that done
Little bit of luck never hurt no one"
- Sammy Hagar
- Damian DeadLove
" Little by little, gonna get it, I swear
One more piece of the puzzle, I'm there
Gotta get lucky gotta get that done
Little bit of luck never hurt no one"
- Sammy Hagar
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19th Oct 2024 10:29am
20th Oct 2024 3:59am
Thanks so much for reading and your continued support, Keith. Glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
19th Oct 2024 11:50am
Guilt is a horrible feeling to carry with you. We all make mistakes, I think the key to being free is forgiveness. Of others and yourself. Great piece, Damian, food for thought.
20th Oct 2024 4:02am
Thanks so much for reading and your continued support, Duende. Glad you liked this piece. Very sound advice by the way. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
19th Oct 2024 12:07pm
Superbly crafted Damian but who hasn't made mistakes in there lives, you don't need me to tell you, how we deal with them and hopefully come out the other side stronger and wider ❤️
20th Oct 2024 4:03am
Totally agree, Pete. Thanks for reading and your continued support. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
19th Oct 2024 5:35pm
20th Oct 2024 4:04am
19th Oct 2024 9:52pm
There are no mistakes in life, only experiences. How can we possibly know what it is we truly want, or who it is we truly want to be, without negativity providing the contrast of feelings that we don't want to repeat?
20th Oct 2024 4:07am
Thanks so much for reading and your wise commentary, Tams. So honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
DL
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20th Oct 2024 4:20am
Thanks for reading, and your insightful commentary, Shiloh. Sometimes everyone needs to hear a voice of reason. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
20th Oct 2024 4:52pm
I swear I live my life in confession mode, always owning my errors & trying to understand & right what I can. The feel of these musings is akin to my journey within. We all face a day of reckoning. Question is...can we make peace with ours? Beautiful, DL
21st Oct 2024 1:47am
Thanks so much for reading, Willow. I'm glad you liked the write. That is the big question. Can we make peace with ourselves. Totally agree. Appreciate you.
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