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ONE HEART (II)-(newly revised, much longer, expanded revision)
ONE HEART
BROKE SLOWLY
LIKE FALLING LEAVES
THE OTHER
SHOOK COLDLY
YET CLUNG
TO THE TREE
HERE LATE
IN THE SEASON
OF THEIR
NATURAL FALL
WITH WINTER S
DEEP CLOSURE
NOW SOON
CLOSING IN
NOW SOON
COMING ON
WHICH TAUGHT ME
TO SEE
JUST HOW
EASY AND HARD
IT CAN BE
FOR SOME
TO SIMPLY
LET GO
OF THE LIFE
THEY HAVE KNOWN
WHEN THEIR TIME
HAS FINALLY COME
WHICH THEN
LED ME FURTHER
TO REFLECT UPON
JUST HOW LONG
MIGHT I
CLING ON
TO THE LIFE
I TOO HAVE
ALWAYS KNOWN
WHEN MY TIME
HAS FINALLY COME
OR PERHAPS
I MIGHT SIMPLY
JUST CLOSE
MY EYES
TAKE IN
ONE MORE
SWEET LAST BREATH
GENTLY HOLD
IT IN
SURRENDERING COMPLETELY
THEN WITH
A PEACEFUL FEARLESS
KNOWING SMILE
SLOWLY EXHALE
LETTING ALL GO
AS MY RADIANT
SOUL SOARS
OFF AGAIN
BACK INTO
THE LOVE
AND LIGHT
ONENESS SOURCE
OF ALL
WE ARE
BEYOND EACH
SUCCESSIVE TEMPORAL
LIFETIME S NECESSARY
ETERNAL SPIRIT S
EXPERIENTIAL
LIFE LESSONS
EITHER LEARNED
OR NOT
SOUL HONING
JOURNEY
DOWN HERE
IN THIS ILLUSORY
TEMPORAL DREAM
UP FROM
OUT OF WHICH
THIS NEW
LITTLE POEM S
SELF REFLECTIVE
METAPHORICALLY INSPIRED
LITTLE STORY
WAS SUDDENLY
JUST BORN
WHEN I WROTE
DOWN INTO WORDS
THESE SEVEN
SHORT LINES
OF VISUAL THOUGHTS
WHICH SUDDENLY
CAME INTO
AND FILLED
MY HEAD
WHICH SIMPLY STATED
FIRST BEGAN
WITH MY
INSPIRED DESCRIPTION
OF THAT VISION
WHICH SIMPLY SAID
AND BEGAN
WITH THIS
ONE HEART
BROKE SLOWLY
LIKE FALLING LEAVES
THE OTHER
SHOOK COLDLY
YET CLUNG
TO THE TREE
BUT WITH THIS
ALL NOW SAID
I CAN ALSO
NOW SEE
THAT PERHAPS
BEYOND JUST THIS
THERE MAY BE
NO OTHER
GOOD REASON
EXPLANATION
NOR JUSTIFICATION
FOR THE EXISTENCE
OF THIS
NEW LITTLE POEM S
SPONTANEOUS SPILL
THAN WHAT
YOU NOW SEE
BEFORE YOU
HERE
REGARDLESS
OF WHETHER
IT HAS
OR HOLDS
ANY TRUE MEANING
OR NOT
FOR BOTH NEITHER
THE QUESTION
NOR MEANING
CAN FIND
NOR HAVE
NO PLACE HEREIN
IN WHICH
TO SAFELY LAND
IN THIS LIKEWISE
ILLUSORY
NEW LITTLE POEM
SO I GUESS
PERHAPS
ONE MIGHT SAY
MORE SIMPLY
AS A RATHER
NOWADAYS
ARCHAIC FIGURE
OF COLLOQUIAL SPEECH
WELL I GUESS
THAT S ALL
SHE WROTE
HERE
ON THIS ONE
AT LEAST
FOR
NOW
FOLKS
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