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Darling DUP
My darling DUP
you have all spoiled me so terribly
you allow me to go through your minds
and all its intimate confines.
Some are dark and unabashed
Some come at you as quick as a flash
there are others that I would not have guessed
If I lift the cover, I will get to the best
Oh, my darling DUP
What is to become of me?
If I go away, will I survive?
it's almost an addiction
I need your words to stay alive
Can someone be lured into a written bed
With the right words going straight to one's head
There are times when my skin feels like it's on fire
and I sit here waiting
Always waiting
anticipating you to take me higher
DUP my sweet
Who else will you want me to meet
I've been asked over a dozen times
to read and ingest the best of all crimes
Is it hot or is it just me
will this ever stop
no, this cannot be
I should go
But I can't
never wanting to lose control
I have sighed
and cried
Aw’ed
and some needed applause
I have held my breath
not knowing where you're going
at times, you scared me to death
But yet I keep on going
With your Sonnets
your Senryu’s
your Haikus
your whoopsie do’s
I am a goner
I bleed almost every day
1000 strategic cuts
I place it on the page
I guess what I'm saying
there is no more running
between you and I
take me now
or forever lose me
don't be shy
you have all spoiled me so terribly
you allow me to go through your minds
and all its intimate confines.
Some are dark and unabashed
Some come at you as quick as a flash
there are others that I would not have guessed
If I lift the cover, I will get to the best
Oh, my darling DUP
What is to become of me?
If I go away, will I survive?
it's almost an addiction
I need your words to stay alive
Can someone be lured into a written bed
With the right words going straight to one's head
There are times when my skin feels like it's on fire
and I sit here waiting
Always waiting
anticipating you to take me higher
DUP my sweet
Who else will you want me to meet
I've been asked over a dozen times
to read and ingest the best of all crimes
Is it hot or is it just me
will this ever stop
no, this cannot be
I should go
But I can't
never wanting to lose control
I have sighed
and cried
Aw’ed
and some needed applause
I have held my breath
not knowing where you're going
at times, you scared me to death
But yet I keep on going
With your Sonnets
your Senryu’s
your Haikus
your whoopsie do’s
I am a goner
I bleed almost every day
1000 strategic cuts
I place it on the page
I guess what I'm saying
there is no more running
between you and I
take me now
or forever lose me
don't be shy
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Re. Darling DUP
18th Oct 2024 1:20am
We like the flow and that you wrote as if to a lover, the site does have a life. Tight
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18th Oct 2024 1:23am
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18th Oct 2024 1:43am
Re. Darling DUP
18th Oct 2024 2:10am
Now I’m jealous of DUP….
You love him more than you love me…
I have no chance I see….
You both deserve to be….
Together lost in this world of poetry
You love him more than you love me…
I have no chance I see….
You both deserve to be….
Together lost in this world of poetry
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18th Oct 2024 12:14pm
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Re. Darling DUP
18th Oct 2024 10:25am
"I bleed almost every day
1000 strategic cuts
I place it on the page" > love these lines.
Such an amazing love poem for DUP, truly enjoyed this one.
1000 strategic cuts
I place it on the page" > love these lines.
Such an amazing love poem for DUP, truly enjoyed this one.
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18th Oct 2024 12:31pm
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Re. Darling DUP
18th Oct 2024 7:06pm
👏 👏 👏 excellent 👌 ink spill 👏 fia:) reminds 🤔 of the dup poem I wrote check it out when you get a chance ok!!
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom queen 👸
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom queen 👸
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18th Oct 2024 7:12pm
Re. Darling DUP
20th Oct 2024 8:19pm
YES. There is not a shy bone in my body. This is so amazingly fresh and different expressing the attitude of many of us on DUP. Thanks dear one.
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20th Oct 2024 8:57pm
Re. Darling DUP
21st Oct 2024 2:53am
I remember that feeling when I first started sharing my writings on DUP.
I've never been on any other writing site, so it was all new.
It felt exhilarating and addicting.
You expressed this perfectly!!
I've never been on any other writing site, so it was all new.
It felt exhilarating and addicting.
You expressed this perfectly!!
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21st Oct 2024 3:06am
Re. Darling DUP
21st Oct 2024 2:54am
Now this is clever and cool ! I love it!
I've been in several writing sites over the years, and DUP is honestly one of the better ones.
It brings our personalities to the forefront if we choose to do so, via the relaxed style of commenting. And you obviously hold your own quite well, Fia. Whether it's your creative prowess or your positive energy, it's a reward having you here.
I've been in several writing sites over the years, and DUP is honestly one of the better ones.
It brings our personalities to the forefront if we choose to do so, via the relaxed style of commenting. And you obviously hold your own quite well, Fia. Whether it's your creative prowess or your positive energy, it's a reward having you here.
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21st Oct 2024 3:07am
Re. Darling DUP
21st Oct 2024 3:04am
hello beautiful Fia I was at other writing sites before I came here no other site I encountered allow the freedom for you to be yourself that this one does with as much interaction I don't like writing into a vacuum I come here and just read I can feel the poets here their energies and yours is beautiful ❤️
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21st Oct 2024 3:08am
Re. Darling DUP
23rd Oct 2024 3:06pm
An honour and a privilege to have made thy acquaintance my lusty Lady.
For here is the gathering of many a wondering poetic souls, who bring life to this otherwise cemetery of ghostly whispers, a virtual mausoleum of creative thought that will long outlive their mortal creators.
Your voice, either in spoken word or prose, is a welcome addition to the symphony verse.
Xxx
For here is the gathering of many a wondering poetic souls, who bring life to this otherwise cemetery of ghostly whispers, a virtual mausoleum of creative thought that will long outlive their mortal creators.
Your voice, either in spoken word or prose, is a welcome addition to the symphony verse.
Xxx
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23rd Oct 2024 3:36pm