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Autumn, a Painting of An Artist
Confusing thoughts in Fall, me ceased to stalk
worries into the heart, floated and stepped aside
wonders from afar spreading their smiles in a flock
along with October breeze, pleased to go for a hike.
Worries into the heart, floated and stepped aside
Autumn, enthroned in the soul empire, would set its fire
along with October breeze, pleased to go for a hike
walking paths trodden by shades of foliage, nothing dire.
Autumn, enthroned in the soul empire, would set its fire
a painting of no formal learning, that's Nature the Artist!
walking paths trodden by shades of foliage, nothing dire
a soothing harmony awakening the muse of a harpist.
A painting of no formal learning, that's Nature the Artist!
wonders from afar spreading their smiles in a flock
a soothing harmony awakening the muse of a harpist
confusing thoughts in Fall, me ceased to stalk.
Published 14th Oct 2024
Author's Note
A pantoum : is a form of poetry that is composed of four-line stanzas or quatrains with an ABAB rhyme scheme and where the 2nd and 4th lines repeat..
The painting : Nature Beauty by Jovita Singh
The painting : Nature Beauty by Jovita Singh
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14th Oct 2024 9:57pm
14th Oct 2024 10:07pm
So much pleased by your shining presence and praising comment.. deeply humbled and grateful.
15th Oct 2024 00:49am
You write so well Besma.🌹 The imagery evoked is awesome and the picture fits the poem.
15th Oct 2024 10:29am
So much obliged to you by your genuine praise and elating feedback my dear Grace ❤️ deeply humbled and grateful. God bless you
15th Oct 2024 2:56pm
Beautiful words for beautiful time of the year, from a beautiful poet. Thanks for sharing. Hugs ad love, Oral
15th Oct 2024 3:29pm
Your great support and beautiful feedback are highly appreciated.. Thank you heaps for the delight of your visit.. God bless you.
May be the most difficult poetry form is the pantoum, it requires too much attention as to follow a strict rhyme scheme and some tricky steps, while at the same time needs more fine vocabulary to make it look flowingly rhyming,
And you brightly could lead your subject to a safe ending with good topic tackled and poetized..
Great work MY Smile, a successful attempt.Hamid
And you brightly could lead your subject to a safe ending with good topic tackled and poetized..
Great work MY Smile, a successful attempt.Hamid
15th Oct 2024 10:21pm
I call it conscious poetry! When the poet is following a very strict form with a specific rhyme scheme.. but it is so enjoyable at the same time as one feels the huge pleasure of assuring such creation ! Your words of compliment are so precious to me.. You are a poet from whom I have been learning a lot.. deeply humbled and immensely grateful to you. God bless you.
16th Oct 2024 12:58pm
Chère B.,
Wonderful images flow from your pen.
Nature is a work of art, and you add beauty toit.
Simply great.
Kind regards, Gus
Wonderful images flow from your pen.
Nature is a work of art, and you add beauty toit.
Simply great.
Kind regards, Gus
18th Oct 2024 9:28am
Always an immense pleasure to have you here rewarding my humble poetry by your so wonderful and encouraging feedback! So grateful to you for such an honour and delight! God bless you.
18th Oct 2024 11:03am
Hoi hoi
In Amsterdam dialect, we have a word that goes: Unlied translated.
Ongelogen in my dialect.
In the Dutch language there is no distinct word for that. I’d have to say: echt waar. Really true.
So I take the liberty to use my dialect: ongelogen dear B.!
Have a beautiful Friday and a marvellous weekend.
Kind regards, Gus
In Amsterdam dialect, we have a word that goes: Unlied translated.
Ongelogen in my dialect.
In the Dutch language there is no distinct word for that. I’d have to say: echt waar. Really true.
So I take the liberty to use my dialect: ongelogen dear B.!
Have a beautiful Friday and a marvellous weekend.
Kind regards, Gus
