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Daddys Girl (Horror)
The taste of my own blood is not satisfactory
I need for him to come back to me
I may have taken too much; I will admit
I can't hold back I'm a greedy bitch
Pass the blade across my lips.
Feeling the trickle down to my tits
He looked into my eyes it's saying nothing was there
Two black pools of loss and despair
He got away out the window and down the wall
He must have broken his leg it’s a hell of a fall
“You must come back to me
I'm being so sweet
Daddy, come back to me
what we started is not complete.”
You wanted to see everything
You wanted to be my everything
I want to give you everything
Am I not wearing Mama’s ring
You wanted to take the innocence from this soul
There is no innocence, there is no soul
You should have reached the road now
That is a shame
It’s any time now
You’ll be back in pain
I will wait and bleed.
Until your return
I love you, Daddy
It’s me, your little fern.
I need for him to come back to me
I may have taken too much; I will admit
I can't hold back I'm a greedy bitch
Pass the blade across my lips.
Feeling the trickle down to my tits
He looked into my eyes it's saying nothing was there
Two black pools of loss and despair
He got away out the window and down the wall
He must have broken his leg it’s a hell of a fall
“You must come back to me
I'm being so sweet
Daddy, come back to me
what we started is not complete.”
You wanted to see everything
You wanted to be my everything
I want to give you everything
Am I not wearing Mama’s ring
You wanted to take the innocence from this soul
There is no innocence, there is no soul
You should have reached the road now
That is a shame
It’s any time now
You’ll be back in pain
I will wait and bleed.
Until your return
I love you, Daddy
It’s me, your little fern.
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 14th Oct 2024
Author's Note
This is for a comp.
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Re. Daddys Girl (Horror)
14th Oct 2024 1:00pm
Nasty, disturbing and affective. Nice. Let's watch some horror films at night!!
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14th Oct 2024 2:20pm
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14th Oct 2024 1:50pm
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Re. Daddys Girl (Horror)
14th Oct 2024 5:53pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely horrifying 😳 and scary fia:) nice 👌 ink spill 👏 your writing is incredible 👏
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom queen 👸
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom queen 👸
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15th Oct 2024 00:50am
Re. Daddys Girl (Horror)
15th Oct 2024 00:47am
Certainly a disturbing piece, that uses vampirism as a metaphor for incest. I liked that aspect. Would like to see a prose version of this narrative.
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Re. Daddys Girl (Horror)
15th Oct 2024 3:27am
Powerful write, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Best of luck in the competition. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re. Daddys Girl (Horror)
16th Oct 2024 2:30am
This has a lot of in-your-face dark defiance.
Not letting the monster have the upper hand!!
Good luck in the comp!!
Not letting the monster have the upper hand!!
Good luck in the comp!!
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16th Oct 2024 2:40am
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16th Oct 2024 12:18pm
LOVE knife play as you might now and you described that need so well.
...I also am fascinated by blood so this is right up my alley :-)
Good luck in the comp, dear Fia 💕
...I also am fascinated by blood so this is right up my alley :-)
Good luck in the comp, dear Fia 💕
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Anonymous
17th Oct 2024 5:21pm
I like this very much. 'You wanted to see everything, you wanted to be my everything ' this line is so hopeless but relatable.
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17th Oct 2024 6:12pm