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some white dreams
songs got lost somewhere,
verses became slaves of someone,
the gatekeepers of despair
started guarding the door
of self-respecting imagination,
art lost its synonyms,
winds became still and calm,
sand started forming foam in the blue ocean,
young flowers fell to the ground at a young age,
Gulmohar-like houses turned into wax overnight,
burning lamps became dim,
youth lost its passion,
emotions lost their enthusiasm,
tangles tied the feet of the soft creepers of life,
when the clouds of blackness covered the pink world...
Published 14th Oct 2024
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Anonymous
14th Oct 2024 11:52pm
Very intriguing with great use of metaphor!
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Mujhe ye btao ..
Ki mujhe kuch likh kr post krna ka option kyon nhi dikh Raha
Ki mujhe kuch likh kr post krna ka option kyon nhi dikh Raha
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24th Oct 2024 1:18am
This is so good, Dimpy. You've seemed to have found a niche that really compliments your way of writing. It's very good, like all of your material has been for weeks!
You've awakened the true poet in you!
You've awakened the true poet in you!
24th Oct 2024 5:41am
hi Styxian
I really liked your words... thanks for appreciating me.. it always boosts my confidence...
I really liked your words... thanks for appreciating me.. it always boosts my confidence...
