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Snowy Days
She can snare you with a gleam in her eye
Dead before you even hit the floor
Serpents scream while angels begin to cry
Tangled in the web of wanting more
Empty heart so cold like a November rain
Feel the ache growing in your bones
Through sultry pleasure revealing her pain
Pins and needles, sticks and stones
Red-headed beauty with a temper to match
Closing the door hearing the lock latch
She keeps you intoxicated with a sexy smile
Losing your balance now free-falling
Black cat moaning under moonlight’s guile
Suffocated as demon’s are calling
Redemption comes when the guilt is lifted
Released from your troubled mind
Fractured souls while momentum shifted
Time grows short, love remains blind
Many summers ago you finally parted ways
Sometimes she still interrupts on snowy days
Dead before you even hit the floor
Serpents scream while angels begin to cry
Tangled in the web of wanting more
Empty heart so cold like a November rain
Feel the ache growing in your bones
Through sultry pleasure revealing her pain
Pins and needles, sticks and stones
Red-headed beauty with a temper to match
Closing the door hearing the lock latch
She keeps you intoxicated with a sexy smile
Losing your balance now free-falling
Black cat moaning under moonlight’s guile
Suffocated as demon’s are calling
Redemption comes when the guilt is lifted
Released from your troubled mind
Fractured souls while momentum shifted
Time grows short, love remains blind
Many summers ago you finally parted ways
Sometimes she still interrupts on snowy days
Published 12th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. Sometimes we take creative chances, this is one of those times. This is out of my element for sure. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" Ten silver saxes
A bass with a bow
The drummer relaxes
And waits between shows
For his Cinnamon girl"
- Neil Young
- Damian DeadLove
" Ten silver saxes
A bass with a bow
The drummer relaxes
And waits between shows
For his Cinnamon girl"
- Neil Young
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12th Oct 2024 7:06am
What a surprise to see a love poem from your pen :-)
You say it's out of your element, but to me you describe the trials of love perfectly.
"Time grows short, love remains blind" > love this line, among others.
November Rain made me smile and Cinnamon Girl fits your piece beautifully.
Awesome write, Damian. Thank you for sharing.
You say it's out of your element, but to me you describe the trials of love perfectly.
"Time grows short, love remains blind" > love this line, among others.
November Rain made me smile and Cinnamon Girl fits your piece beautifully.
Awesome write, Damian. Thank you for sharing.
13th Oct 2024 4:41am
Thanks so much for your kind words, Duende. I'm glad you liked it. Honored to make your RL. It's out of my comfort zone, I question myself a lot when writing something I'm not as skilled at. If that makes sense? I knew you'd notice the song reference in the write. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
13th Oct 2024 5:42am
That certainly makes sense. I struggle with the anger category, anger being an emotion I don't feel or don't recognzie as such. Slowly learning to recognize it.
There's just a few anger poems, but I felt utterly uncomfortable writing them and posting them, but I believe stepping out of our comfort zone helps us grow - it that makes sense.
There's just a few anger poems, but I felt utterly uncomfortable writing them and posting them, but I believe stepping out of our comfort zone helps us grow - it that makes sense.
12th Oct 2024 8:58am
13th Oct 2024 4:42am
12th Oct 2024 11:08am
The atmosphere in the wording, the image you created and the flow of this piece is divine. The photo is beautiful & mesmerizing. You did a wonderful job here.
13th Oct 2024 4:44am
Thanks so much, Keith. You're far too kind my brother. Glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
12th Oct 2024 11:28am
13th Oct 2024 4:46am
Thanks so much for your kind words, LDF. It is a great song. Gotta love, Neil. Appreciate you.
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DL
12th Oct 2024 12:18pm
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12th Oct 2024 12:38pm
Nicely Done 💯✅ sometimes we have to just take a chance and let what we say land where it may ✍️👍💪
13th Oct 2024 4:49am
13th Oct 2024 5:12am
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13th Oct 2024 4:52am
Glad you liked it, Shiloh. It is a different side for sure, it's a little out of my comfort zone. Thanks for reading. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
27th Oct 2024 3:21am
I had to check it out since you mentioned it on your reply.
It's good to write into uncharted territory. You end up surprising yourself with
the finished write. Great job with this!
and I love that song!!
It's good to write into uncharted territory. You end up surprising yourself with
the finished write. Great job with this!
and I love that song!!
27th Oct 2024 3:27am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. Yeah, I've surprised myself with these couple of writes. Oh, great song. One of, Neil's best. Appreciate you.
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