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Broken
A hollowness in my chest
is filled up with
my tears
that no longer
have the power left
to barge the barriers
of eyes,
so now it's imprisoned
in my heart forever...
This ocean is turbulent
with my emotions,
I can't temper the tempest ;
a tornado has been forming
and my soul is being
sucked deep into this vortex
is filled up with
my tears
that no longer
have the power left
to barge the barriers
of eyes,
so now it's imprisoned
in my heart forever...
This ocean is turbulent
with my emotions,
I can't temper the tempest ;
a tornado has been forming
and my soul is being
sucked deep into this vortex
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Re. Broken
11th Oct 2024 3:22pm
I have never suffered from depression, but I certainly feel I understand an aspect of it after reading this.
Good to see you fighting through. xo
Good to see you fighting through. xo
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Re: Re. Broken
11th Oct 2024 3:27pm
I have been battling with depression for than a decade n now have been under med since last year...
Though I don't wanna take the med...I feel I can get through this but the doc is continuing the med....
Thank you so much ,dear Tams for adding it to your reading list. It's an honour ❤️
Though I don't wanna take the med...I feel I can get through this but the doc is continuing the med....
Thank you so much ,dear Tams for adding it to your reading list. It's an honour ❤️
Re. Broken
11th Oct 2024 3:32pm
me and depression been best of pals for 40yrs actually Jan was 40th anniversary of first suicide attempt
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Re: Re. Broken
11th Oct 2024 3:35pm
Oh, I'm sorry to hear that, dear poet
Seems my friendship with depression will turn into a long life companionship...
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Hope you get out of the clutches of this demon
Seems my friendship with depression will turn into a long life companionship...
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Hope you get out of the clutches of this demon
Re: Re. Broken
11th Oct 2024 3:38pm
Re. Broken
11th Oct 2024 5:30pm
Re: Re. Broken
11th Oct 2024 5:39pm
They what does kill you only makes you that much stronger you got this never give up 💪 For it's not over when you lose it's over when you QUITE.
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re: Re. Broken
12th Oct 2024 1:22pm
What has been broken can always be removed or replaced or repaired, by the power which is in your own hands as well as your own spiritual existence as they go hand in hand to fix that what has been broken 💔😔.
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re: Re. Broken
12th Oct 2024 1:25pm
Re: Re. Broken
12th Oct 2024 1:28pm
I always say that know no one is sent to you by chance or accident for it's a blessing in disguise sometimes 😔🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re. Broken
12th Oct 2024 3:04am
Powerful write, Dreamz. Depression weighs so heavy on the soul, at least in my experience. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. Broken
12th Oct 2024 10:37am
Re. Broken
12th Oct 2024 4:32pm
A very frank and honest write.
Carving out a strong feeling.
Regards
James
Carving out a strong feeling.
Regards
James
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