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Release Me
free me heal me
and release me
make me obey
force me tame
me redeem me
make me yours
take me away to
a far away place
just you and me
in our tiny bubble
together we tear
down the doors
open our space
create a galactic
worship universe
our sacred place
where we explore
our hidden desires
immoral fantasies
getting rid of limits
shame & inhibitions
please, take me away
and surrender me babe
and release me
make me obey
force me tame
me redeem me
make me yours
take me away to
a far away place
just you and me
in our tiny bubble
together we tear
down the doors
open our space
create a galactic
worship universe
our sacred place
where we explore
our hidden desires
immoral fantasies
getting rid of limits
shame & inhibitions
please, take me away
and surrender me babe
Published 8th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Lifehouse - Take Me Away.
https://youtu.be/UraoTsbqPaQ
https://youtu.be/UraoTsbqPaQ
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8th Oct 2024 2:51pm
9th Oct 2024 1:28pm
That you were transported by my words is a huge compliment.
Thanks heaps for your visit, comment & the RL, you made my day 💕
Thanks heaps for your visit, comment & the RL, you made my day 💕
8th Oct 2024 2:55pm
9th Oct 2024 1:28pm
Hoi hoi
Yes, all the urgency is there.
What a powerful write.
Be back tomorrow for another eyeful. Beautiful artwork too.
Kind regards, Gus
Yes, all the urgency is there.
What a powerful write.
Be back tomorrow for another eyeful. Beautiful artwork too.
Kind regards, Gus
9th Oct 2024 1:28pm
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9th Oct 2024 1:30pm
8th Oct 2024 6:30pm
Luv the pic...luv the words.
....and now I'm distracted...in a good way
Thank you Duende
....and now I'm distracted...in a good way
Thank you Duende
9th Oct 2024 1:32pm
So happy to hear that :-) Your "distracted" made me smile.
Thanks heaps for your comment and reading list Naajir, it's an honor.
Thanks heaps for your comment and reading list Naajir, it's an honor.
Anonymous
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9th Oct 2024 1:42pm
Trust is everything, just as openness and communication. I know you are not into BDSM, so I'm honored you like this one. Thanks heaps for your visit and comment. I appreciate it, D
Anonymous
8th Oct 2024 11:22pm
This is perfection, D.
Having the person who can do this for you is indescribable. I hope you have this💕
Having the person who can do this for you is indescribable. I hope you have this💕
9th Oct 2024 1:44pm
9th Oct 2024 3:09am
The poem elevates the bodily pleasure, seeking liberation, which is indeed spiritual.
--R K Singh
--R K Singh
9th Oct 2024 1:46pm
That's an amazing compliment. Thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.
9th Oct 2024 3:26am
9th Oct 2024 1:53pm
Smiles, thanks heaps for your comment & contineous support. I appreciate you :-)
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10th Oct 2024 12:59pm
I did not want to leave this poem without saying this line right here, "create a galactic worship universe." love it. Your way of pleading with options is dually noticed and written well
10th Oct 2024 1:08pm
Sometimes it takes some time before we find the right words. That you love that line means a lot to me, it took a lot of rewriting. Thanks heaps for your comment, you made my day 💕
14th Oct 2024 7:10pm
Sis, you know this one touches a chord in me & resonates strongly. Damn... 💖
15th Oct 2024 5:24am
Yes, I know this one would resonate with you. Thanks heaps for your comment, sis 💖
Anonymous
14th Oct 2024 11:36pm
It's a trade. Giving control to receive it. Pretty beautiful trade, honestly
15th Oct 2024 5:28am
15th Dec 2024 12:39pm
This read like being swept away on a magic carpet of desire and love. Truly beautiful to read this for my morning.
John
John
15th Dec 2024 1:00pm
That it's a beautiful read for your morning is a huge compliment.
Thanks heaps for your comment and the reading list, I appreciate it :-)
Thanks heaps for your comment and the reading list, I appreciate it :-)
Anonymous
18th Mar 2025 12:52pm
Your longing for the desire to be taken, mind body and soul was expressed perfectly. A beautiful write ✍️
18th Mar 2025 1:04pm
