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The KiLLeR iN me..
The burn. You yern..
To turn..
Me inside out..
"Oh child don't pout."
Soon you'll sprout..
Into a woman..
For this is love..
Soliciting solitude for sodomy..
From the prenatal
to the cradle..
Into FaTal..
You've labled me..
Fuck me crazy
I'm your baby.
That is "love"
Right daddy?
To turn..
Me inside out..
"Oh child don't pout."
Soon you'll sprout..
Into a woman..
For this is love..
Soliciting solitude for sodomy..
From the prenatal
to the cradle..
Into FaTal..
You've labled me..
Fuck me crazy
I'm your baby.
That is "love"
Right daddy?
Published 17th May 2012
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Anonymous
17th May 2012 3:02am
If this poem is about I think it is....
it is horrifying but very honest
and brutal portrayal of what adults
can do to a child...sometimes the adults
are parents...even worse...
It has been shown that abused children
become adults who abuse....your title
is so appropriate
Good and sobering poem
Peace
Kitty
it is horrifying but very honest
and brutal portrayal of what adults
can do to a child...sometimes the adults
are parents...even worse...
It has been shown that abused children
become adults who abuse....your title
is so appropriate
Good and sobering poem
Peace
Kitty
17th May 2012 6:41am
That is "love"
Right daddy?
Sad line. I don't need to say why.
Chilling read...I especially loved the way you said, "Into a woman"...the way you trailed off...creepy.
Right daddy?
Sad line. I don't need to say why.
Chilling read...I especially loved the way you said, "Into a woman"...the way you trailed off...creepy.
17th May 2012 7:40am
Anonymous
17th May 2012 8:23am
Hard hitting. That's all I have to say.
17th May 2012 8:37am
Thank for reading all.. I kinda dont know of a comment.. but i appreciate you ..
Beautiful Mistress..this is so dark, sad and chilling..though written in such a brave an honest way..read with such a lovely haunting voice..wishing you peace Crim
23rd Aug 2012 12:40pm
8th Dec 2012 9:32am
something ate her soul up
some skin breathing but little hope
some are this way
wouldnt have wanted to see that
and daddy gets sick
when baby wants to be baby
more than daddy wants to be daddy
some skin breathing but little hope
some are this way
wouldnt have wanted to see that
and daddy gets sick
when baby wants to be baby
more than daddy wants to be daddy
