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Wonderful You
You lift my spirits when I’m down
Your friendship means the world to me
You’re the light in the sky
The dark fantasies I don’t hide
You know what I desire
How to tame me
How to let me roam free
Your words captivate
You know just how to get my attention
How to let my mind play
And you live a world away
Our friendship will never see the light of day
Perhaps that’s why it works so well
You did what I could never imagine
You sent poem number one thousand today
Who does that?
The man who’s heart knows mine, that’s who
From the bottom of my heart
And everything I hope to be
Thank you
Your friendship means the world to me
You’re the light in the sky
The dark fantasies I don’t hide
You know what I desire
How to tame me
How to let me roam free
Your words captivate
You know just how to get my attention
How to let my mind play
And you live a world away
Our friendship will never see the light of day
Perhaps that’s why it works so well
You did what I could never imagine
You sent poem number one thousand today
Who does that?
The man who’s heart knows mine, that’s who
From the bottom of my heart
And everything I hope to be
Thank you
Published 6th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Copyright @ Her 2024. All rights reserved.
For the first poet I met when I joined DUP. Your talent is inspiring. Your friendship is one of the most important in my life. And the best thing about you is that you would tell me all of that is untrue. You are amazing because you don’t try to be the wonderful friend that you are. You do everything you do just by being you. Thank you 💋
For the first poet I met when I joined DUP. Your talent is inspiring. Your friendship is one of the most important in my life. And the best thing about you is that you would tell me all of that is untrue. You are amazing because you don’t try to be the wonderful friend that you are. You do everything you do just by being you. Thank you 💋
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7th Oct 2024 1:14am
7th Oct 2024 11:45pm
7th Oct 2024 4:53am
Dear H,
That is wonderful and such a beautiful way to honor that friendship. Lovely piece. H🌷
That is wonderful and such a beautiful way to honor that friendship. Lovely piece. H🌷
7th Oct 2024 11:46pm
7th Oct 2024 11:58am
What a lovely tribute for someone so important to you 💕
...despite him being humble (I think) I'm sure he appreciates this.
...despite him being humble (I think) I'm sure he appreciates this.
7th Oct 2024 11:47pm
7th Oct 2024 2:10pm
There's always that one who went above & beyond to make us feel welcome & valid. Beautiful, girl
7th Oct 2024 11:49pm
Thank you, girl.
He was the first person to comment on my first post, the first person to send me a DM, he’s stood by me through everything.
He’s a very good man and a very good friend.
He was the first person to comment on my first post, the first person to send me a DM, he’s stood by me through everything.
He’s a very good man and a very good friend.
7th Oct 2024 11:02pm
This is amazingly beautiful. I can only hope to be such a friend to someone. Truly inspiring.
7th Oct 2024 11:51pm
Thank you so much, my friend.
I’m fortunate to know you. You’ve have nothing to worry about ;)
I’m fortunate to know you. You’ve have nothing to worry about ;)
9th Oct 2024 9:40pm
10th Oct 2024 00:28am
10th Oct 2024 4:19am
does this guy really exist
sounds like someone out of the romantic era of poetry
they long dead
but I'll be your huckleberry
sounds like someone out of the romantic era of poetry
they long dead
but I'll be your huckleberry
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