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Soul Lovers
it feels like we are
sexual soulmates
L said out of the
blue during sex
and that is true
though on other
aspects we pair
quite perfect too
as if our planets
are stellar in line
two similar lives
Colliding as if it
was meant to be
we see what lies
beneath our eyes
always complete
each other's lines
we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space
delicate souls who
found each other in
this magical cosmos
& where our road goes
Only the universe knows
sexual soulmates
L said out of the
blue during sex
and that is true
though on other
aspects we pair
quite perfect too
as if our planets
are stellar in line
two similar lives
Colliding as if it
was meant to be
we see what lies
beneath our eyes
always complete
each other's lines
we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space
delicate souls who
found each other in
this magical cosmos
& where our road goes
Only the universe knows
Author's Note
INXS - Never tear us apart.
https://youtu.be/AIBv2GEnXlc
https://youtu.be/AIBv2GEnXlc
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Re. Soul Lovers
This is very beautiful and I'm glad you have this in your life.
I loved - we are dark matter and starfire 🖤 ⭐✨
Image is great, perfect.
I loved - we are dark matter and starfire 🖤 ⭐✨
Image is great, perfect.
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7th Oct 2024 11:12am
So happy you love this one and particularly that line, it's my favorite too :-)
Thanks heaps for your comment, the smiles and for saying the image is perfect 💕
Thanks heaps for your comment, the smiles and for saying the image is perfect 💕
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7th Oct 2024 11:12am
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6th Oct 2024 8:55pm
Beautiful piece Duende especially as one of my favourite themes too, space, the moon, the stars, sky, etc... one of my favourite tunes as well 🌌❤️
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7th Oct 2024 11:12am
Oh wow, one of your favorite themes and tunes even?
Thanks heaps for your smile-inducing comment and support :-)
Thanks heaps for your smile-inducing comment and support :-)
Re. Soul Lovers
7th Oct 2024 2:35am
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7th Oct 2024 11:14am
Re. Soul Lovers
"we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space"
Duende, I love this stanza. Beautiful write. Into the list it belongs. Great song by the way. I think INXS is a very under appreciated band. Appreciate you.
DL
and starfire in this
divine outer space"
Duende, I love this stanza. Beautiful write. Into the list it belongs. Great song by the way. I think INXS is a very under appreciated band. Appreciate you.
DL
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7th Oct 2024 11:34am
Yes, INXS is most certainly an under appreciated band. Smiling widely you quoted my favorite stanza. Thanks heaps for your comment, RL and continuous support, I appreciate you :-)
Re. Soul Lovers
7th Oct 2024 4:31am
Some people are fortunate and others aren't. I aren't. :)
I envy you. Nice writing, D.
I envy you. Nice writing, D.
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7th Oct 2024 11:24am
Trust me, I met him when I wasn't looking for anything. That happens and it will happen for you too, sooner or later. Thanks heaps for your comment and support. Don't lose hope, D.
Re. Soul Lovers
7th Oct 2024 4:51am
Dear D,
It’s always such a sweet relief to know there are such connections like this in the world. Your formatting and tempo for this write is fabulous. And I’m so happy to know there is joy in your universe. Lovely write. H🌷
It’s always such a sweet relief to know there are such connections like this in the world. Your formatting and tempo for this write is fabulous. And I’m so happy to know there is joy in your universe. Lovely write. H🌷
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7th Oct 2024 11:30am
Dear H,
There are amazing men and beautiful connections. Before him my experiences with men were (1 exception aside) far from good. Thanks heaps for your heartwarming comment 💕
There are amazing men and beautiful connections. Before him my experiences with men were (1 exception aside) far from good. Thanks heaps for your heartwarming comment 💕
Re. Soul Lovers
7th Oct 2024 11:52am
Just . . . . .wonderful . . . .you made me fanboy when I read this hahahaha . . . . Just a little :)
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7th Oct 2024 12:00pm
Fanboy, haha, I can go for that. Thanks heaps for your comment and RL, Inkplay :-)
Re. Soul Lovers
7th Oct 2024 2:09pm
You know I'm over here grinning & squeeing! This is such a beautiful moment here, sis 💖
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Re: Re. Soul Lovers
8th Oct 2024 11:08am
Yes, I know ;-) It was a special moment for sure. Thanks heaps for your comment, sis 💖
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7th Oct 2024 4:02pm
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8th Oct 2024 11:12am
Wow, I'm a bit speechless. Thanks heaps for your comment & the RL, it's an honor :-)
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Anonymous
14th Oct 2024 11:35pm
The road will go where you pave it
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15th Oct 2024 5:18am