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You Want To Rub Some Hawaiian Tropic On Me Or What?
John walked into Phylicia's house.
He saw her naked on a deckchair.
He stripped and joined her.
He saw her naked on a deckchair.
He stripped and joined her.
Published 3rd Oct 2024
Author's Note
The title of this wordku poem happens to be what one woman says to a friend who acts on a better idea of his own.
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3rd Oct 2024 6:05am
"He stripped and joined her" - I could easy imagine from the picture it happening there and then, with no change of position on her part.
3rd Oct 2024 3:03pm
